June 16th, 2009 at 12:35pm
I loved this.
The song 'Self Conclusion' is quite wonderful, isn't it?
And I loved how you tied it in so nicely.
Very lovely. :)
Self Conclusion - Comments
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December 30th, 2008 at 11:32pm
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Whoa.
I said on the "Rate The Story" thing that I loved the way the conversation flows in this, and that still holds true. I've never read anything like this before. Its so beautiful.
I had to read the end, becasue I needed to know what she chose and I'm glad I did. I like that she's such a badass even at the (possible) end. She's still like, "You hurt and me I'll jump."
Its great.
I loved it.
:arms:June 24th, 2008 at 04:58pm -
I'm not entirely comfortable with the idea of these two people deciding to live/be together because it's just kind of out there, but it is fanfiction, so I do accept it.
My favorite lines:
"You make it sound so easy to be alive but tell me, how am I supposed to seize this day when everything inside me has died?"
God, that line is so beautiful. I love the, "how am I supposed to seize this day," part most, it just makes the whole line, brings it together.
prove yourself to be better than my attempt at flight.
The phrasing of that. I like how she doesn't say anything about killing herself, or suicide, but that she says, "Flight," because it also shows how from her point of view, death would be a release, something to lift her up and bring happiness, rather than an ending, it would be a beginning for her.June 1st, 2008 at 04:46am -
I't was nice kinda sad but good ;)May 28th, 2008 at 03:59pm
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i only comment wen skittles are involed want some :)May 28th, 2008 at 03:54pm
s'fawesome.