To Talk Without Thinking - Comments

that was intense! Frig...
I liked the flashbacks showing how it all started. <33
it was good!

wow, that was cool.
really good.

I especially loved how you repeated the phrase.
really powerful.
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that was brilliant! :)
i loved it!

wow. thats was....
amazing. im simply speechless.
and that doesn't happen often.
you are an amazing writer.

:cheese:
You are amazing. End of story.
I loved how you repeated that one line over and over again, you really drove it into my skull.
"To talk without thinking is to shoot without aiming."
Just ksdjfdgdf perfect.
And your description?
It was out of this world.

You did a seriously fantastic job with this. :cute:

That was AMAZING!

You honestly put me to shame.

Damn!

I think that was one of your best, dahling.

AMAZING job!

Luvs you!

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As above, excellent use of repetition. And desctiption.

I liked the mixture of... lust? and violence. Mostly violence. It was interesting. Where Gerard was talking about Frank having nerve in particular.

First paragraph = amazing with the depth of description, I don't care if I've already said I liked the description. I'll say it again.

:omfg:

Wow. The description in this is...breath-taking.
The last line was awesome and...I just can't get over the freaking description!

I could really need you in my english exams :tehe:

I loved the repetition of "To talk without thinking is to shoot without aiming."
It adds an effect.

Anyway, LOVED it!