Until You Feel It - Comments

  • the apex predator;;

    the apex predator;; (150)

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    I'm done. Took me three days :D

    It was sad.
    Happy.
    Lovey.
    Cute.
    I liked it :D

    ...wow, is this a suckish comment or what? D:
    I'll probably get words sometime later.
    Soooo you might get another comment from me >D

    Sorry :(
    June 22nd, 2010 at 06:08pm
  • ooooo

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    Erin did nothing really but...I HATE HER!!!!!!!!!! i'm so jelous XD
    January 4th, 2010 at 02:44am
  • ooooo

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    Erin makes me mad too!!!! DX
    January 4th, 2010 at 02:22am
  • Alice Verney

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    awesome story
    September 8th, 2008 at 02:57am
  • NorCal Noise.

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    *sigh*
    That was like the fucking cutest ending ever.

    Seriously.

    I can't wait for the sequel, something epic hasta happen.
    It hasta!!!

    Hasta...
    Hasta la vista =]

    XD

    Sorry.
    But seriously, I loved this story like religiously.

    I honestly am like bouncing in my seat for the sequel.

    XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOX for eternity!!!
    September 7th, 2008 at 01:46am
  • unhearted

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    I just finish reading your story and it was amazing!!! I loved it and enjoyed it very much...i'm kinda sad that it's over but you promised sequel, which i cant wait to read!!

    btw I love your layout..it was very sexy xP
    September 6th, 2008 at 11:41pm
  • EliseObscure

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    I love it but, the ending made me sad. I can't wait for the sequal. =)
    September 6th, 2008 at 06:30pm
  • Awesome-tacular-ness

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    oh man shelby.
    i really am crying.
    like major tears.
    i cant wait for the sequel...
    September 6th, 2008 at 05:20pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    I loved the way you ended the story! And the quote at thwe end of the story.

    " There goes my everything." There goes my life by Kenny Chesney. Clap Clap Clap

    Please keep on writing!!
    September 6th, 2008 at 06:40am
  • starsonfingernails

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    Gah, the ending made me cry! ...but that's good. Because I like when the characters in the stories make me feel their emotions...if you get what I'm saying...haha. But it extraordinarily good! Can't wait for the sequel! :D
    September 6th, 2008 at 06:15am
  • Reinvent 12

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    Oh my God! That was great! Great ending to this and everything.

    And I love how you repeat the "for ever and ever" thing. Absolutely perfect!
    I cannot wait for the sequal and im sure it'll just as, if not better, than this!
    September 5th, 2008 at 11:37pm
  • faramir;

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    Not cool Shelby -sniff- not cool. You made me cry. It was still good though. -hugs-
    September 5th, 2008 at 06:26pm
  • asphyxiate

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    That was an amazing ending. It was simple, but it had a lot of meaning. And it was just perfect.
    I can't wait for the sequel and I'll definitely stay subscribed to this.
    Great story! Awesome, occasionally depressing and everything in between. (:
    September 5th, 2008 at 05:30am
  • Vannasian.

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    OMG!!
    plz tell me theres a sequal!!
    lol.
    or atleast do the alternate ending soon?!?!
    September 5th, 2008 at 05:22am
  • Stray Dog

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    i CANNOT tell you how much i loved this story.

    and even more..how much im excited for the sequel!!!
    September 5th, 2008 at 04:57am
  • JessaKay

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    OMG Shelby!
    I loved it it was so perfect!
    i actually had a lump in my throat and found breathing to be somewhat difficult lol...i can't wait til you start the sequael!!
    Fantastic Story!!
    September 5th, 2008 at 04:11am
  • Velvet Shadow

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    AWWWW i loved the ending I can't wait for the sequel!!!!!!!!
    September 5th, 2008 at 03:58am
  • Hannahdoll

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    I'm sad to see it end...
    but I really can't wait for that sequel.
    This story is definately one of my favorite Tokio Hotel stories..
    its right up there with Liebe Ist.
    Anyway, I loved this story to pieces.
    :]
    September 5th, 2008 at 03:52am
  • Ninja Squirral!!!

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    wow...shower..wow...wow...erm...wow
    l.ol YOU ARE AMAZING!!!
    WOOT WOOT@!!!
    STANDING OVATION FOR YOU MISSY!
    I LOVE THIS STORY TO PEICES!!!!!!
    too bad its over:(
    AT LEAST THERE'S A SEQUAL! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!
    CANT WAIT!!!
    lol im hyper...
    September 5th, 2008 at 03:50am
  • NorCal Noise.

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    Aweee!!

    That chapter made me giggle like a lovestruck teenager.
    ....wow.

    Oh, and sorry for not commenting sooner.
    I just got off of heavy duty lockdown, installed by my mother.
    No computer during the school week because my grades were shit last year =]

    I cannot wait for teh last chapter and teh sequel!!!!!!

    I love this story like this much:
    :yah

    :lmfao

    Love you darling!!
    August 31st, 2008 at 07:25am