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This is really good, your detail is amazing and offers great imagery for the reader, it flows great and I didn't spot any Major errors, nothing that stopped me reading or made me have to re read what I had already read... overall it's great, good job!

Holy crap a SUV followed her?! I can't wait to see more. Update soon, I can't wait for more.

I didn't catch it actually. You are not dumb either love! I loved this update. SO after all they finally came face to face, and we know Jesse isn't ready to forgive him just yet. I can't wait to see the next update. I loved Happy's reaction to being kicked in the leg. Classic Happy. I can't wait to see more love!

I loved this update. I am glad she's staying in charming. I can't wait to see what is going to be in store for the next chapter. I really gotta know what's going to go down especially now that she's staying in Charming.

Thank goodness! Mia is staying and can help Jase settle in, though I really do hope that Mia decides to stay in town I can't wait to see what happens next.

Finally Mia is back! The girls are back together again! I can't wait to see how Jax makes all of this better.

Damn, Jax did fuck up bad. I hope he can make a right of his mess. And Gemma. Someone needs to punch her. I mean, god let Jax be happy! I loved it babe! I really can't wait to see the next chapter! Update soon please!

I love this! I can't wait to read more of this honey!!!

i cant wait until you start this story and i cant wait to see what happens with Jase and Jax

Hi yes, obsessive fan of yours here. Can you start this one already? Yeah thanks :D