Right off the bat, you’ve written so much emotion into the story and it’s already tugging at my heartstrings. ;_; I’ve never watched DBZ and I don’t know much about it, but I still care for Gohan, especially in his situation of losing his father. I like the hints of chaos in the aftermath of this battle, and knowing that Gohan’s father sacrificed himself is always heartbreaking. I’m glad it ends on a positive note, though – despite the turbulent emotions Gohan showed, he saved the world, and that’s always something to be proud of. This was very easy to read even though I’ve never watched DBZ, and you did a great job at conveying emotion in the aftermath of something monumental! :D
October 5th, 2014 at 11:07pm