I know that not much has been written so far, but I really love the idea for this story. Your writing flows well from thought to thought, and the whole of it is beautifully written. My only very slightly constructive criticism is that I feel I can't really picture the characters - and I know you're able to give incredible description, because you do so well with the environment. The beginning is captivating, and I'm instantly interested in learning more about the story line. I really hope that you continue. Best wishes!
October 13th, 2014 at 10:59pm
