A Lovely Mess - Comments

I love your story!!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Great story I want to see where John and Jaime and up but I would like background on Jaime

sooooo intrigued!!! Great writing skills! I wanna know the history behind Jamie soon!

Great update! I'm very curious about the history between John and Christina. Hopefully we'll be able to learn about what happened? :) And I'd have to say the relationship between John and Jamie was very spontaneous, but I am crazy about them. I also can't wait to learn more about Jamie. The whole staring at herself in the mirror... Interesting. And just the whole 'broken' part about her. Thanks for the update!

I'm so intrigued by this, and I can tell I'm gonna be hooked! The first chapter is great, and I love the dynamic between John and Jamie already. I'm really excited to see where the next few chapters take them and what the future holds for the two of them. Seems like they have quite the connection right off the bat. Great job! (:

Okay, just read the first chapter and you can say I'm HOOKED.
I love when stories really focus on the main character's feelings and emotions and it's not just pure dialogue. And you've already introduced the girl and I'm swooning at the way John is acting with her! And I literally looked up the lyrics to the song and I'm listening to it right now. Can't wait for the next update.