Frost Bitten - Comments

@goddessofmuse

We are two writers who do things, usually, differently than each other.
At the moment, we're mainly just getting into the groove of working together again.
I'm thrilled that you enjoy it so much, though!

I really enjoyed reading this! The more I read into the story, the more I was gripped by it, and that was because of the way you revealed little details about the characters' personalities and pasts as the story went on. :)

I get the feeling at this point that Vincent is going to end up becoming attached to Blume. Of course, I might be wrong, but whatever the outcome, I'm curious to see what happens next!

Both you authors have done a good job writing this! One teeny weeny tip from me would be to maybe include a little more description of the characters' surroundings. I did spot instances in the story when you DID do that (which is great!), but there are certain parts of the story where it's harder for me to picture the characters in the setting.

I understand that you may have done this to put more intimate focus on the characters as a pose to the surroundings, which I have nothing against! I suppose it's just personal preference really.

But yeah, this is an awesome story you have here! Good luck with it, I'm sure it's going to continue to be awesome!