Just Say Yes - Comments

ilovehockey4952 (100)

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I think you really need a beta. Your readership has fallen off because it's very difficult to read. I don't intend to sound mean,but is English not your first language? There are many grammatical errors and overall mistakes. The story is cute,and I really think having someone advise you and proofread would be a huge help. Keep trying!

March 26th, 2015 at 07:42pm

Thatmom (100)

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I think Lolindsey might be trouble.

January 11th, 2015 at 12:07am

synonymforsarcasm (100)

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uh oh

December 27th, 2014 at 02:25am

synonymforsarcasm (100)

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uh oh

December 27th, 2014 at 02:24am

Thatmom (100)

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Patrick stop being such a jerk!!! And for the record, I can't stand hockeyfanfiction. It is so difficult to navigate!!

December 4th, 2014 at 01:19pm

umngrrl (100)

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that was real bitchy, I would feel like shit if I spoke to someone that way.

November 13th, 2014 at 03:27pm

umngrrl (100)

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people are just being weird, and apparently some people don't like mibba which i dont get since it's light years ahead of hockeyfanfiction with the number of bugs their website has.

November 8th, 2014 at 10:16pm

Thatmom (100)

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Good for her!!!!

November 8th, 2014 at 09:07pm