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  • jagksexual

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    Alan ;-;
    October 27th, 2014 at 11:45pm
  • the-searcher159

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    Awh Austin <3 this is just precious. I hope Alan makes the right decisions *cough* be with Austin *cough* :3
    October 25th, 2014 at 02:18am
  • Tinavu101

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    Ancnxmmakzlqkejfjkakans update please pretty please with a cherry on top
    October 23rd, 2014 at 12:50am
  • bonesexposed

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    i feel so bad for alan aw :(
    October 22nd, 2014 at 04:14pm
  • the-searcher159

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    Want!! Need!! I love this and I want a cookie
    October 19th, 2014 at 06:04pm
  • bonesexposed

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    this is so good im in love
    October 19th, 2014 at 03:46pm
  • paralyzedinmelody

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    I need to know what happens with alan and austin!!
    October 18th, 2014 at 02:47am
  • BulletProofRevenge

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    Alan :(
    October 16th, 2014 at 06:19pm
  • NephthysPhoenix

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    More please!
    October 15th, 2014 at 02:43pm
  • chvser

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    Yay jalex and cashby! I'm in heaven ☺️
    October 14th, 2014 at 04:10am
  • Schnupfen

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    The chapter is great! The amount of dialogue you use makes it really easy to read without being too lowbrow. In future chapters, some more detailed description of the circumstances and surroundings of your characters wouldn't hurt, but it's already really interesting as it is. Keep up the good work!
    October 13th, 2014 at 03:02pm
  • BulletProofRevenge

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    I can already tell this is going to be really good update soon please
    October 13th, 2014 at 06:28am
  • LexiValeska

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    wheres my damn cookie???? Lol great first chapter!!!
    October 13th, 2014 at 05:31am
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