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  • mrsmshadz

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    Haha ok. Can't wait for more!
    November 18th, 2014 at 01:22am
  • Abeautiful7DisasterX

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    @ mrsmshadz
    I technically co-write this with my sister. And I just write it like she gives it to me...she...well, she confuses the shit out of me. I do plan to edit this...and since you brought that up, I better do that soon. I promise they will get longer now that I have more time. Thank you for reading!
    November 17th, 2014 at 11:54pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    Is that chick's stripper name really Gager? As in gag?? I thought Gary knew Starla worked there since he said he wanted to work out things with her?? Matt has some nerve calling Emilee a slut when not even 5 minutes ago he wanted to hump the chick!!! Lol I know I read that she hates Val. I hope you update soon, I like it so far. Hope the chapters get a lil longer as well!!!
    November 16th, 2014 at 01:19pm
  • Abeautiful7DisasterX

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    Thank you all. Sorry about the cliff hanger...and I promise the other half of this chapter will be up this week. ;-)
    November 11th, 2014 at 03:06am
  • purple89

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    *sharpens knives* where on earth is the rest of this chapter?! you damn chapter teaser person! not nice....you better have that next chapter up soon! LOL
    November 10th, 2014 at 03:22pm
  • AJ9

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    Just found this and I love it. I can't wait for Val to find out about Matteo. Please update again soon. xxx
    November 8th, 2014 at 06:58pm
  • simply amanda;

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    Loved this update. Can't wait to see more.
    November 8th, 2014 at 06:18pm
  • purple89

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    i really like this so far. please please update soon. i really want to see what happens next
    November 7th, 2014 at 05:58pm
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    I really love this! Amazing work!
    November 7th, 2014 at 03:10am
  • Rene92

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    Matt is being a total asshole. It would be funny if she made him jealous somehow, haha. Update soon :)
    October 26th, 2014 at 06:34am
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    @ buffyminx
    Thank you! Working on the update now. Mr. Green
    October 17th, 2014 at 06:26am
  • buffyminx

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    I like it can not wait for the next chapter and to see matt's reaction to emily dancing there
    October 17th, 2014 at 06:24am