So, I remember reading this several months ago...and I could never come up with a comment that expressed how I felt about it.
After searching in vain, and posting in the Story Finders! thread...I came back across this. I...I'm still at a loss for words, as this story is one of the most powerful I've ever read. The blunt and raw emotion, and the way your portrayed it through each of your characters is stunning.
At first read, I only saw it in Katlin...the loneliness, and the discomfort. But after re-reading it several times, I began to see bits of it in Alex too.
It's beautiful, and one of the most moving stories I've ever read. I won't forget this easily. Just...absolutely beautifully written.
I loved it Nina. It was perfect :) I did enjoy that it didn't take place on the beach, I don't know why but it was niceee. I really really did love this story.
Well it most certainly wasn't painful to read Nina. It was wonderful! I really liked the description alteration, how everything was meanacing without Alex... I really adored that. & Zack's appearance :tehe: I love it
After searching in vain, and posting in the Story Finders! thread...I came back across this.
I...I'm still at a loss for words, as this story is one of the most powerful I've ever read. The blunt and raw emotion, and the way your portrayed it through each of your characters is stunning.
At first read, I only saw it in Katlin...the loneliness, and the discomfort. But after re-reading it several times, I began to see bits of it in Alex too.
It's beautiful, and one of the most moving stories I've ever read.
I won't forget this easily. Just...absolutely beautifully written.