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  • sharpiewashere

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    @ bob nathaniel bryar
    Thank you so much! <3 I actually don't mind commentary on each chapter. I like the feedback and hearing the readers' thoughts on the content. It pushes me to keep updating. But thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it and I hope you enjoy the sequel!
    July 21st, 2015 at 07:20pm
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    I didn't think it'd be appropriate of me to.comment every single time I read another chapter, I binge read this in three days. I am completely in love with this story! It is so well written and very original and I felt like I.could see this being a season on Sons of Anarchy! Gosh I don't know what else to say besides that I love this story! Thank you so much for putting it up on mibba! I've seen it on fanfiction but my computer won't open it. Now I'm off to read the sequel!
    July 21st, 2015 at 07:12pm
  • fairjer0620

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    I hate to admit this, because i write and post here as well, but i dont often comment on the stories i read and subscribe to until they are completed. Mostly because i don't know what to say until the story is finished and i have the whole idea to look back on and reflect like i would any other completed boik. rhat being said, i Loved this. It is unfortunate that i didn't actually get into SOA until it was already into the last 4 episodes of the final season, so i actually subscribed to this and held off on reading any of it until I'd gotten through the whole series up to those 4 episodes so i wouldn't read any potential spoilers. Thank the sweet Baby Jesus for netflix and being trapped in the hospital for a 10 day stretch so i could binge watch it on my computer without being distracted my by three year old. Now I'm sad that one of my new favorite shows is over (but happy there are talks of a prequel of sorts, I'd love to watch a story of the beginnig of the Sons!) This is an amazing and very well written story. Readingn it, I found myself often wishing that the real story had gone the same way (especually with the Juice storyline, and Fiona and Chibs) instead of how it actually ended. And also that Jax had been given the chance to actually live and get away instead of following in his father's footsteps. (I was completely devastated by his death!)

    Thank yoy for writing this and putting your own spin on the story. You're an amazingly talented writer and I'm looking forward to the sequel and what it might bring for SAMCRO and the other Sons. Please don't leave us hanging for too long! Smile
    June 30th, 2015 at 12:27pm
  • girlygirl.m

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    Please update soon. I love this story! It feels so real!
    June 6th, 2015 at 05:53pm
  • Valeska Moon

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    PLEASE UPDATE SOON. YOU CANNOT JUST LEAVE ME FUCKING HANGING LIKE THAT MAN, YOURE DRIVING ME CRAZY D:
    May 30th, 2015 at 05:23am
  • sharpiewashere

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    @ deathbat harlot
    Yeah, I've been rethinking that, too. We'll see what happens.
    March 15th, 2015 at 05:34pm
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    I Love the story and I know that callie is a patched member but I wish she didn't have to wear her cut during the wedding especially with how you discribed the dress
    March 15th, 2015 at 05:30pm
  • synystarr

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    Still loving this.
    March 6th, 2015 at 10:04pm
  • sharpiewashere

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    @ Cyanide_Suicide_6661
    It could quite possibly be in the cards for them. ;)
    Miss Althea's nosiness is going to get her in trouble. Don't worry.
    March 4th, 2015 at 11:44pm
  • Cyanide_Suicide_6661

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    Uh...Captain slut-bag is diggin' into Callie's past? That's a no-no. But it was perfect with a quickie ending. Pun intended. I wish you would write in that Callie gets pregnant. Because let's be honest, Tommy Flanagan aka Chibs probably makes beautiful babies. Awesome chapter can't wait for the next update!!!
    March 4th, 2015 at 09:34pm
  • Cyanide_Suicide_6661

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    Chapter 36 : This one is awesome. I love how you wrote the wedding scene out. And made it where you added the line from the show. But then Chibs gets sick at the end :( All in all it was good. Can't wait for the update...
    March 4th, 2015 at 01:54am
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    Chapter 35 : I think that this one had the best ending. I mean what better would you have to show up late for a wedding??? Loved it!!!
    March 1st, 2015 at 04:34am
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    Chapter 35 : I think that this one had the best ending. I mean what better would you have to show up late for a wedding??? Loved it!!!
    March 1st, 2015 at 04:34am
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    Chapter 34 : Damn...Things just got difficult for Callie. Feeling guilty for Juice Boxes death. But then they got Tino. Shit's about to break down.
    March 1st, 2015 at 04:04am
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    @ Cyanide_Suicide_6661
    Juice was a doomed character. Whether he died by a fan's hand or Sutter's, he was always doomed. I thought dying surrounded by the club, holding Chibs' hand was a better way to go than Tully stabbing him in prison. He deserved a more peaceful passing.
    My brain-storming partner threw that idea in my head. I can't say much, but that chapter is there for a reason Wink
    February 28th, 2015 at 11:23pm
  • Cyanide_Suicide_6661

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    Chapter 33 : Hell. I think I grieved along with them. And adding stories about Juice Box. I loved it. But ending it with Callie having babies on the brain. Are we going to see mini-chibs running around?
    February 28th, 2015 at 11:16pm
  • sharpiewashere

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    @ Cyanide_Suicide_6661
    Aww.
    I don't believe my writing is nearly good enough to be published or that's what I'd be doing, but thank-you!
    February 28th, 2015 at 11:09pm
  • Cyanide_Suicide_6661

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    You my dear need to be writing books. Or better yet writing movie script's. I came back to see a few chapters written. So, I just read 32. I cried....Never thought I would cry from a story but you did the impossible...
    February 28th, 2015 at 10:21pm
  • hannah_grace

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    Loved the update, but don't kill juice he's my favorite character
    February 20th, 2015 at 09:21pm
  • Cyanide_Suicide_6661

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    Awww, why did Juice have to get hurt? And RJ died? I kinda figured he would along the way but not that soon. I loved it, even with the sad parts! Can't wait for the next update!
    February 20th, 2015 at 03:00am