That ending :O You HAVE to write another one! You can't leave a cliffhanger that big!
I have to say, I kinda wanted to kill Oberyn mid way through this story - He was being such a dick, but I understand why now. So now he is no longer a dick, but still, haha.
I love that Elia was still alive, although the circumstances weren't great at all, and what about Petyr and Cat?! There's so many things you've left unanswered and I need to know!
[BTW; Best cliffhanger ending I've ever read. Stop being to great plz.]
It's been eight days??? I swear I didn't mean to take this long to get around to commenting.
I kinda agree with Eddard - I'm all for Dorne involving women and showing that they're not frail, but damn Tabitha, you just had twins. You should have stayed at Winterfell, I mean it's only been a month (?) since you gave birth!
He managed to take her??? I must confess, I still have a soft spot for Littlefinger/Catelyn, but not like this.
I hope he only took Catelyn and not baby Sansa. No harm should ever come to Sansa.
Nooooo, Petyr! Why??? Why on earth would you do that?? Ugh! I had a sort of ship for you and Catelyn anyway (even though you're kinda creepy), but you just went and punched a pregnant lady!
Oh my! Twins?? Jeez! She's going to lose a lot of blood, far more than if it's just one baby. I hope she ends up being okay.
Oh dear...Oberyn, you could have told her that before you married. Brought it up during a conversation, y'know, make sure she was okay with it before you seduced her and you married. Really.
There's a baby coming and Oberyn's reaction was so sweet and then there's all of Tabitha's hesitation and worries and a war brewing. Gah! Feels woman!
I know Elia had to go but damn, that was sudden! However everything is just completely overshadowed by Ellaria That escalated sexily I can't even with this. Like I'm suspicious but excited
Oh dear, Ellaria. I do think someone is up to something. Yes, probably. I assume. I don't want to think too much in case you're just leading us on again.
I had an expectation from the chapter title but omg???????? Nicole, what is this sorcery??
And I hope Elia gets to Sunspear safely! Had a sneaky suspicion about Rhaegar in the prequel (turned out wrong, but still suspicious) but there's a long line of madness in the Targaryens, so she's got to be careful!
I am finding the urge to slap Oberyn right now, very hard to repress. I want to grab him and shake him, but then I also understand the genius of the plan. But I'm mad they sprung that on her. Bloody crafty Martells...
I'm interested as to how this will go, their alliance would be something unseen before in a story, but it's not out of the realms of possibilities - and you are more than talented to pull it off.
One thing though...How long has this plan been in the works? Was he going to use the same trick with Cersei and secure the Lannisters armies if he married her instead? It makes me wonder...