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  • fifthghost

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    @ Wave789
    I already posted it on there the other day! It's under my own tag as well as the illness, drunk, and angry tags.

    Thank-you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.

    Poor Alex was in a rage, you can blame Jack for that. Happy endings for all though. <3
    October 22nd, 2014 at 04:19am
  • Wave789

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    Eve you should submit it to ATFF because i hadn't realized that you had already posted it until you linked it to an ask :) im glad i saw that ask though because i had been really looking forward to this one shot and it definitely didn't disappoint :) Jack and Alex were both pretty dumb though like really Alex? Punch a mirror? When you have haemophilia? Great idea. -.- Good thing that Jack found him in time... But it was adorable how they finally got together in the end and how Jack was so worried about Alex :) it was a great mix of drama and fluff, awesome job! Mr. Green
    October 22nd, 2014 at 04:15am
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    @ kickthepj
    I'M SO HAPPY, I can't believe people actually like it.

    It's okay, Jack apologised and everything and Alex can forgive him because they're gonna be all mushy heart-eyes at each other for the rest of forever.

    Thank-you baby omg. Trust you to want a sad ending but I'm glad you liked the happy one. :') <3
    October 22nd, 2014 at 03:44am
  • kickthepj

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVED THAT why do i yell all the time jfc anyway i was so sure he was gonna die and i was like well shit i guess that's it then but then he didN'T AND JACK U FUCKIN IDIOT "oh i'm so scared wow alex sry for makin u almost kill urself lol" (that makes it sound like i'm bashing you for writing it but i'm not ok it was all very very great my emotions are just everywhere) god i don't even know how to feel about that bc i was so set on him just dying and my tummy had that (lovely) twisting sad feeling and part of me wanted a bad ending but wow what else is new. but the happy ending is like even better and this is a really long comment omg ily bye <3
    October 22nd, 2014 at 03:40am
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    @ InsanelyDelirious
    Well I have no immediate ideas for a vampire fic but who knows...

    omg the whole Anna Green thing totally astounds me like. She's a fic writer and it's a book. She literally published a book of fan fiction about real people. Whaaaaaat. But man, I've yet to read it, it's so long. Very in depth. I'm not sure I have the attention span. Or the ability to not cry myself into a coma over it.

    but thank-you so much, Jack and Alex blow kisses to you from his hospital bed.
    October 21st, 2014 at 12:52pm
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    @ InsanelyDelirious
    Well I have no immediate ideas for a vampire fic but who knows...

    omg the whole Anna Green thing totally astounds me like. She's a fic writer and it's a book. She literally published a book of fan fiction about real people. Whaaaaaat. But man, I've yet to read it, it's so long. Very in depth. I'm not sure I have the attention span. Or the ability to not cry myself into a coma over it.

    but thank-you so much, Jack and Alex blow kisses to you from his hospital bed.
    October 21st, 2014 at 12:51pm
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    @ jvhnocallaghan
    oh god if you go with the blood play I'll probably die but you're probably the first person i can think of to pull that off

    i really liked the innocence! and I'm glad you didn't let this go. you wrote very well four years ago. you tend to pull things out of the past and finish them and (not sure how to spell the word or onomatopoeia bc it's in French but I hope you know what i mean) then you've created something magical. honestly, if you were to pull an Anna Green (THROAM, but you probably knew that) i wouldn't be surprised
    October 21st, 2014 at 06:56am
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    @ xMareBear14x
    Ah, he would've grown a pair of balls eventually, he likes Alex too much to keep quiet about it.

    But thank-you so much! It's crazy that people like this to me.
    October 20th, 2014 at 03:15am
  • xMareBear14x

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    Oh my goodness I loved this so much! It sucks that Alex had to almost die for Jack to stop wearing his ass like a hat and remove his head from it... But still, the end was super cute.
    October 20th, 2014 at 02:59am
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    @ InsanelyDelirious
    I could totally get on board with a sexual vampire fic now... blood-play with BLOOD-PLAY.

    This is a really lovely compliment, you always leave such good comments??? In my original draft of the story, I was going to make them go a bit further than kissing but I preferred the innocence of it and I didn't want anything even mildly smutty... also partly because I couldn't be bothered but simple kisses just felt better for the story overall.

    Thank-you so much though, honestly. I'm not entirely fond of it; I hate writing in first person (I used to love it and hate third wow what changed) most of the time and I just wasn't really feeling Alex all that much after the party scenes but I just wanted to do it. It felt different to me too, probably because I started it so long ago. Up until the fight with Jeremy, all of that was written by 14-year-old me. But yeah. I've always had it saved. Never could just delete it. And it's finally a thing. I'm so emotional omfg.
    October 19th, 2014 at 11:02pm
  • overslxpt

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    i was kind of hesitant to read this because of the bloody blood (although i have a thing for blood so) but this came out really nice and i like how it wasn't right off the bat "omg we kissed let's have sex and fall in love" and this was very ??? European written i don't usually notice but it was and i don't know the way you wrote this was really nicely and a different feel than your usual stories and this overall was really good i liked the little vulnerable childish jack you made there and it was really cute bless you
    October 19th, 2014 at 09:59pm
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    @ c0rktree
    It was amusing, I appreciated it. Also kudos for soldiering on through despite your dislike of blood omg.
    October 19th, 2014 at 08:22pm
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    idk man i wasted all my good comment material on literally yelling to you what i felt while i was reading it. but. it was lovely and i cringed at the bloody parts but it's okay because the cheesiness and homosexuality of it all made up for it ily.
    October 19th, 2014 at 08:13pm