Lips of Deceit - Comments

Love it :)

"No! No, Matthew, please! Listen for a second - "

"NO SARAH! It's over. For good. Now get out of my house."

"Matthew please, we can make this work! I know about you and Kayla but I don't care, I know you love me - "

"I don't love you. I haven't for a long time. And Kayla has nothing to do with us breaking up. It's all you. Now leave!"

I do not feel bad in the slightest for laughing at that conversation.. (:

"Uh, Shads, what're you doing?" Brian asked from across the room.

"Something I should've done a long tme ago."

He turned to face me, lifted my chin with his overly large but gentle hands and placed a soft kiss on my lips, in front of everyone.

"Mattie, you can't..." I trailed off as he stared straight into my eyes.

"I can't wait, baby?"

FUCK HER ABOUT LIKE THAT, LAD!
God, fudging men, eh?

I pushed his hands away from their place on my shoulders and walked out of the room. I felt everyone staring as I left. I reached the stairs and sat down with my head in my hands on the third step, just so I could hear the convesation from the room I had just exited.

Just for the record, I was not staring,
I have my Baker boys to stare at - pervy face -

I have always loved how Sharn would always put someone in their place when they needed it. And every word she had just said was true. I wasn't ready for major changes, and as much as I hated Sarah, she didn't deserve any of that.

Especially when I'm in a bloody argumentative mood.
God, people stop talking to me when I argue with them and then I'm like, 'OH YEEEEAH, I WIN.' - cheesy grin -lol@howthatrhymed.
I'm sorry, but Sarah shouldn't have been a bitch to you, so I thought she deserved that.. (-8

Once again, everyone stared as I took Brian's hand and led him from the room.

I needed one of our 'talks'.

Ah, can't beat a bit of Retard and his wise-ness.

You know I love this (:
AndIobviouslyloveyoutrillionsKimmieBarakat!(L)
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"Tought shit, bitch!"

Lmfao! :')
omg, you're such a legend.
OOOOOOH, IS IT SARAH OFF HOLLYOAKS?!?!
I already dislike her.

"It's nice to be home again, Jolly Giant."

lol @ our nickname for Jimmy :')!

"SHARNY BABY! I'M HOME, GIRL!"

"Fuck you Matt!" Zacky shouted to his brother and wrapped his arms tighter around Sharn.

GERRRROFF ME, ZACKY.
Johnny Christ, I wanna see my MattyBee ;(!

"Yeahh I have! Came round to see my Sharny baby, but apparrently she's been stolen from me!" He pouted at Sharn and she giggled making her shuffle closer to Zacky without noticing.

HE POUTED AT ME! HE POUTED AT ME! - has a heart attack. -
You're killing me. Very slowly. :')

I felt a large hand cover my own. I looked down and saw Matt [Sanders] caressing my fingers with his own.

WIT WOOOOO!
Check out Mattyfew getting all close with you ;]

"Matthew, a word, in the kitchen now."

FUDGE OFF, WHORE.
- Zack, MattyBee and me tackle Sarah to the floor. -
RUNNNN! AND BE FREE WITH MATTYFEW!

Ok, so I basically love you millions.
And I love this story.
And we're seeing Forever The Sickest Kidsssss & Kill The Arcade in nearly two weeks, AHHHH :]
Iloveyou(L)
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I just realized,

"Kayla, its eleven thirty. What d'you mean stupid times in the morning?!"

What the hell am I even doing up at 11:30am?!
Have a lie in, Sian.
For Christ's Sake - shakes head. -

Iloveyouuuuuuuuuuu!
And we're going to see All Time Low todayyyy! ;]
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I just read this over and I totallyyyyy forgot to mention this in my last essay;

She got up and laughed as Zacky started to caress his now numb backside.

No, baybay!
I'll caress it for you, eh? ;]!

GAHHHH,
I can't believe you go away in three days ;|
What the hell, maineeee?
THEMAINE,OMG;]
Iloveyou!<3[:
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nicee
update soon?!
*subscribes*

ESSAYYYY! ;]!

'YO HOME-BOI!!'
"YO HOME-GURL"
"LOVE YOU BAY BAY!"
'LOVE YOU MORE BAY BAY!'
"YOU IZ COMIN TO VISIT FO SHIZZLE!"
'ORR, BAY BAY! WICKED, BRRRRRAP!'
"INIT, YOOOO!"
'SUP, HOMIEEE!'
"SHURRUP, FOOOOL"
'MAKE ME A MEAL, BIATCH'
"FER SURE BAY BAY!'
'GOOD HOE! LOVE YOU BAY BAY GURL'
"LOVE YOU MORE BAY BAY BOI!"
'MATTYBEE OUT, YO!'
"SHARN OVER!"

Lmfao, Matthew Baker and I are cool, factttt!
And I actually can't believe you put that start up that I said on msn :')!
Orr, made me laugh though,
Cause we is gangstaaaa init!

"Sharn, get your ass off of me"

No, shurrup.
You're fatter than me!
So you can't complain you odd, left handed boi!

"I swear you want my brother."

You're right, I do - nods -
Cause he is sexy and actually sings most of the time,
Unlike you.

There wasn't much height different,

Are you joking me?! ;0
He's like a giant compared to me!
My giant though (L)

"MATT! KAYLA! SHARN AND ZACKY GOT IT TOGETHER!"

Pshh, unfortunatley not in the nookey way, ;(

Aha!
I love this, and frankly, you know I do!
Cause you're an amazing writer, by far, yo!
Iloveyoubucketloads!<3[:
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ESSAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;]

My friend. My bestest friend. My Kayla was back where she belonged. I missed her far too much when that asshole basically kidnapped her and kept her away from me.

Damn straight! [PFFT face!]

She told me everything. How he hit her, how he treated her like a slave, how she wasn't allowed to see any of her old friends, how she rarely saw her family, and how he had raped her on her birthday.

He's a right twat him!
I would have gone round and smacked him in't face, me!

What kind of person keeps someone away from their friends?

Mattyfew. When he wants alone time with Kimmie ;]!

Matt pushed me off and I fell on the floor with a painful bump.

Yeahhh,
I love how I absoloutely got thrown about that morning ;|

"Sharn! Matt's on the phone for you!"

"MATTYBEE!"

*MAJOR FIT!!* It's my MattyBeeeee -D [< goofy face (y)]

I rushed to talk to him but slid along the wooden floor in my fluffy socks, flying into Zacky as I got into the kitchen. We landed in a pile on the floor, with Zacky still holding the phone.

Helloooo, sailor [insert kinky face here please!]

I can't believe you're making me wait until the next chapter ;|
I want to know that your fingers are typing this up now..
Like mine are typing this out for you ;]
Talking about MattyBee, yom yom!
Ew, I just bit on my necklace on now it tastes like metal and gross stuff in my mouth!
I think it's going to make my tongue go all funny.. feels that way anyway..
Bring Mor P-NUT Buter THxPLZ! -D(L)
I loved this oneee,
And I love them all,
I can't wait for the next chapter now! :3
I well love you Kimerthy!<3[:
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LMAO @ me ruining your moment with Matt ;]
Ooh, I wanna read the next one ;|
GET YOUR CHAPTER OUTTTT ;]!
Ican'twaituntilMattBakercomesintoittbh..
Hahah!
Eee, this is amazing, and you know I think so :]
IloveyouloadsBridey;can'twaituntilFridayandSaturday!<3[:
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Your author notes make me laugh :')
"Aww, I love him"
Lmao, I LOVE YOU MORE THAN MATTYFEW DOES!
He can get in lineee mate!
Moremoremore!(L)
SoyoucanintroduceMattyBee..
Lmao!
Eee, this is bladdy amazing and you know I love it!
IloveyouBridey!<3[:
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Eee!
I've been waiting so long for this :3
MATTYFEW WANTS YOUR PROTECTIVENESS BABIESSS!
Yeahhh, cause that makes sense ;D!
Lmfao
Mmm, Jimmyyyyyy (L)!
But obv Zacky more.. and then MATTHEWBAKER!
Ahahaaaa
IloveyouBrideyyy<3[:
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more!

I love this story tbh :')!
I WANT CHAPTER FIVE UP!
I put my chapter four up for you, fair deal?
Mm, yes ;D!
Haha :]!
You're such an amazing writer, you Kimmie!
And I'm seeing you tomorrow, yay!
Aha,
IloveyouBridey;foreverandever!(L)
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oo i like more soon ?

=D
i do rather like this....
continue?
=]

i like it

'Has a huge crush on Zacky Vengeance of A7X'

Mmm, yes pleaseee ;D!
Haha, I love you tbh!
And I can't wait until these chapters are uppp so I can read about our fiction livesss ;)!
And you just nearly made me pee my pants!
SOMEONEWASONLINEONTHEVENGEANCEUNIVERSITYMYSPACEOMGGG
I can't even type properly now ;|
I'm shakinggg, lmao
IloveyouBrideyy;andsodoesMattyfew(L)!
But I love you moreeee!
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