Walk My Way - Comments

I love the way the story flows. Good job guys!!

This is a really good start, there's plenty of detail and everything flows nicely... the change between authors doesn't mess up the reading either which is awesome... Good job guys :)

I like this a lot!

Their flat sounds rad as hell, I want.

"The smile on her face turned bitter as memories began to flood her mind." Okay, now I'm wondering what's up, because awards usually bringing happy times and yet Azalea's face is happy-sad and I just need to know. But damn, girl, all that musical talent, she's got awards and I'm very interested to see how her musical talent plays into the fic.

We introduce Calum from a picture and I'm already like nope because the way she reacts doesn't sound good at all, alright Hood, what the hell have you done.

PAST!MICHAEL GET OUTTA HERE WHO THE HELL'S BELLS ARE YOU FROWNING OUT MOVE. AT LEAST CALUM'S GOT MANNERS GOOD LORD. AND THEN SHE WANTED THE LOOK AGAIN BUT COURAGE AND NO AZALEA NO LOOK UP AND ASDYJKL;

". . .deep inside her heart, she somehow could feel that something momentous was going to happen, to both of them." OOH BUILD-UP I AM SO RIDICULOUSLY EXCITED FOR THIS AAAH.

i hope this story turns out good cause im really interested! xp i actually decided to give it a try this early because i came across it while having that exact song stuck in my head. i hope i dont sound mean:)

i hope this story turns out good cause im really interested! xp i actually decided to give it a try this early because i came across it while having that exact song stuck in my head. i hope i dont sound mean:)