Sick Vessels - Comments

Okay, first of all, I adore this layout. It's so beautiful. And secondly, this was amazing. To me, the functions of the heart are so beautiful. Like it keeps you alive, it keeps your entire body circulating so you don't die and just...yeah (I watch way too much Grey's Anatomy).

Anyways, the simplicity of this is my favorite part of this whole piece. The beginning, I think, is the best part. The way you hook readers in with the first sentence. I love it. This was wonderful. Great job!

This is definitely one of the best things I've read here where length is concerned. It's as if each word has been thought out and they are all necessary. That first part reminded me of something Nicole Krauss might write - and I adore her. Fantastic!

This almost has me speechless. I love it. I love the title, the description, the page break. I want to paint this on my wall.

AMAZING job.