OMG I SO DIDNT REALIZE YOU HAD WRITTEN THIS. I remember reading this once a long time ago and being just amazed by it. I love it when a story is told in so few words and done well and you definitely do it well. I disagree with some of the previous comments about it not giving enough character development and whatnot; personally I like stories that are just little snapshots like this. I feel like it leaves a lot of the rest up to my own imagination and sometimes I like to wonder instead of being informed of every little thing. I loved everything about this.
September 15th, 2015 at 09:26am