Bathwater - Comments

@ decay
i'm so glad you think that, because that's exactly what i was going for with this piece!! thank you so much, i'm v glad you liked it!!

Well I was not expecting that ending, but I absolutely love this nonetheless. The simplicity to the words and yet how serious the ending is takes some real talent, you know. I don't even know if I can do that. I actually like the repetition of "I" in every paragraph. It contributes a lot to the simplicity. This was simply wonderful and the layout is also gorgeous. Great job!