Well, Hell Just Ain't the Same Without You, Babe - Comments

As always, sorry it took so long to read this!

This was very emotional, but in a cathartic way, it helped both of them. I'm excited for this tour, I think it will be fun.

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I loved this chapter. Everything about it. I love the entire part with Madison. I loved the end with Tyler finding her. It was all so perfect and emotional and amazing.

Great job baby! So sorry it took me so long to get caught up.i love you!

This chapter was just so sickeningly sweet i could taste the dust oozing out of it. Tyler is ridiculous. I love him.

I love you too

Omg the end of this chapter was so fucking sad. I welled up a little. I needa tyler. Actually, I have a tyler. :) he's so good to her..so caring and loving. She'll get through it. But he's right it just takes time. Being around her family will help for sure. Its always good to have your support system around you.

Ok, I loved this chapter. I like the idea of her and Madison getting closer. Not to toot my own horn, but that girl has a lot of good going on in her life, she's stable. Not that Lana isnt good, but she is a vampire, so that makes her a little unstable. Lol And the part where her and Doug were coming up wwith a new line, omg! That is my dream relationship right there. Lol

The second part was just as good, but obviously in a different way. Its good that Tyler knows and I think he handled it perfectly. He was angry, but he was controlled about it. Hopefully he can help her to stop those destructive actions.

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Awww, this was such a cute chapter, exactly what I needed. When Bevy said they were licking each other I died. So funny. I could picture the whole thing in my head. And that last part, omg, so sweet. I loved it! More soon!

I liked the part where she was talking to her mom. Its cool to be friends with your mom and have adult conversations sometimes. And Bevy is the cutest of course. I'm glad they went home, its good. I just wish she could stop cutting. the lying is not good for their relationship, and hurting herself isnt helping, it makes things worse.

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I liked the part where she was talking to her mom. Its cool to be friends with your mom and have adult conversations sometimes. And Bevy is the cutest of course. I'm glad they went home, its good. I just wish she could stop cutting. the lying is not good for their relationship, and hurting herself isnt helping, it makes things worse.

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I liked the part where she was talking to her mom. Its cool to be friends with your mom and have adult conversations sometimes. And Bevy is the cutest of course. I'm glad they went home, its good. I just wish she could stop cutting. the lying is not good for their relationship, and hurting herself isnt helping, it makes things worse.

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I loved this chapter. It gave me everything I wanted from the last chapter. It was very relatable for me reading Tylers parts. And I'm excited for the visit with her family. Hopefully it helps her.

Now I'm caught up on this one. What do I have left?

Cute chapter. Except the cutting part of course. That sucks. I was hoping more would be brought up about that. Tyler just blew it off kind of. But again in glad she had a good time at the party. Even if she is hiding.

That ring is beautiful. I miss making polyvore sets. I used to get so into that.

This was a nice little filler chapter. Kind of getting us into what she's going through and how she's doing. I'm glad they had a mostly good evening. She definitely needs to get out of the house more to help readjust.

This one was emotional for me, I know exactly how Tyler was feeling, like you would do anything for the person you care about, to help them, and to feel helpless against what they're feeling. I just hope that this trip to see her family helps her and she can get closer to recovery.

This one was really long, dang. And the end was so sad. I feel so bad for her. But she's got a good support system. So she'll be Ok. Tyler is awesome and just everything that is right and perfect in men. Lol.

B but good chapter. I'll read the rest tomorrow.

I liked this one and that she just got to hang out with her friends and be free from her trauma for a few hours. And if tgere is one thing that group can do it is party. Lol. They do it so well and its always so fun. I just hope this cutting thing doesnt get out of control. That would be really bad.

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I thought I had two chapters of this to read, but it was only one. Haha. But this was really good. I feel so bad for Jackie. The poor thing just went through the worst trauma ever. Tyler is so awesome too, he's really being a trooper and just doing a great job.

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This one was so emotional! Oh god, I just wanted to hug Jackie the whole time. And Tyler. I feel like the whole cast of characters here went through a trauma because they're all so close and when something like this happens, it affects everyone.

So, thanks for giving me emotions. Like I didnt have enough of those. Lol. More soon.

I'm going to be a little critical, which i apologize for in advance. But it just didn't have the emotion that I was expecting. The phone call was pretty much it. That was really good. The rest of it just seemed really rushed like you were just trying to get through it because you "had" to write it for the same of poison.

I hate being critical, i really do. But i have to be honest with you.

I am looking forward to the next chapter to see how you play it out.

Shit, this was emotional. Jackie's take was different from Lana's, but it was good to see her side. It went by fast, but I understand you didnt want to drag it out for readers of poison.

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Woo, sexy time. I love that morgan gets a shoutout for tbe sleazy sex chaptwrs. She's such a slut. Jk. Lol

I loved tbis chapter, it was sweet, corny, sexy. And now we're getting close to matched up with Poison which is good.

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