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  • flatline inhibition

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    I finally updated myself on this story. It's so good. Can't wait for the next update. :)
    December 15th, 2008 at 07:57am
  • FuriousXStarlight

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    uhh i only read chapter one, it was really good, i love it so far and cant wait to read more :) keep up the good work, this is really sad.
    December 15th, 2008 at 03:45am
  • I'm Long Gone Now

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    Oh my gosh, I couldn't find this story until I noticed you changed the title! I was freaking out, lots. Thank goodness that I found it though. I absolutely LOVE this story still. You're amazing and you just make me want to read more. (:
    November 6th, 2008 at 12:43am
  • tyler joseph.

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    Not much to say, except that I loved this chapter. Every single update just gets better and better.

    Can't wait to read more. :]
    September 4th, 2008 at 03:43am
  • I'm Long Gone Now

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    Oh my god, I sound like a complete bitch in here but I absolutely LOVE IT!
    I laughed every time Karen got mad, especially the last part when she stormed out of the house ( because I usually do that too haha ), but grinned when both Rachel and Shawn held hands. Awwwwwh!

    Can't wait till the next chapter!
    I'm so excited for what's going to happen next! (:
    August 27th, 2008 at 11:23pm
  • tyler joseph.

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    Awesome update. Clap I already feel really close to all the characters. Last chapter I was really sad because of what happened with Ben, and now I'm really happy cuz things are getting better for Rachel.

    As for being a character, I'm not too sure if I want to be one. My personailty sucks and I hate my name. :XD But then again, I do love this story and I've never really been a character in one before. So.......I volunteer if you want me to. :)

    Anyways, I'll be anxiously awaiting the next update. :mrgreen:
    August 27th, 2008 at 02:58am
  • I'm Long Gone Now

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    Ah, love this story! Love it lots!
    I feel so sorry for Ben though, getting bullied.
    And I almost cried when Rachel read Ben's journal.
    I could easily imagine it all happening...
    Hope to hear more from you (:
    August 25th, 2008 at 09:53am
  • tyler joseph.

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    This was most certainly NOT an epic fail. God, reading the whole thing made me want to cry. Cry I felt like I was right next to Rachel, reading the journal. The entries were just heartbreaking. It makes me think back to Virginia Tech and Columbine. It's crazy how often this stuff happens. When you introduce a little more drama in each chapter, I get instantly hooked. This whole thing is just.........gah, too great for words!

    This story fucking wins.
    Clap
    August 14th, 2008 at 10:38am
  • Miss Authoress

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    This is a really good story. It's sad and it shows that not only the family of the victims are feeling pain. Great job!

    I love it!
    August 14th, 2008 at 05:41am
  • tyler joseph.

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    Awesome update. ^_^ And a boy..OH EM GEE! xD

    I always found it amusing when people welcomed new neighbors with food. In my opinion, they should screw the cookies and bring over a pie. Or some cake. :XD

    Anyways. Can't wait to read more. :cute:
    August 4th, 2008 at 09:56pm
  • flatline inhibition

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    this story is amazing. *suscribes*
    August 3rd, 2008 at 02:30am
  • fueledbycoffee

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    i got more than a little emotional reading this.

    you write beautifully.
    so much description, i felt like i was actually there.

    can't wait for more.

    ~aj
    August 2nd, 2008 at 05:38pm
  • tyler joseph.

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    Why doesn't this have more comments?

    I love the way it's written and I like the plotline, though it's really sad. I like how Ben's character is portrayed through all the memories. It seems crazy to think that he'd do something so terrible, because from the way he's described, he seemed like a nice kid.

    Well, anyways, I think your story is really good and I'd love to read more. :D
    August 2nd, 2008 at 11:30am
  • flatline inhibition

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    i LOVE this. it's so good. :)
    June 12th, 2008 at 07:05am