Oh my gosh, I couldn't find this story until I noticed you changed the title! I was freaking out, lots. Thank goodness that I found it though. I absolutely LOVE this story still. You're amazing and you just make me want to read more. (:
Oh my god, I sound like a complete bitch in here but I absolutely LOVE IT! I laughed every time Karen got mad, especially the last part when she stormed out of the house ( because I usually do that too haha ), but grinned when both Rachel and Shawn held hands. Awwwwwh!
Can't wait till the next chapter! I'm so excited for what's going to happen next! (:
Awesome update. I already feel really close to all the characters. Last chapter I was really sad because of what happened with Ben, and now I'm really happy cuz things are getting better for Rachel.
As for being a character, I'm not too sure if I want to be one. My personailty sucks and I hate my name. :XD But then again, I do love this story and I've never really been a character in one before. So.......I volunteer if you want me to. :)
Anyways, I'll be anxiously awaiting the next update. :mrgreen:
Ah, love this story! Love it lots! I feel so sorry for Ben though, getting bullied. And I almost cried when Rachel read Ben's journal. I could easily imagine it all happening... Hope to hear more from you (:
This was most certainly NOT an epic fail. God, reading the whole thing made me want to cry. I felt like I was right next to Rachel, reading the journal. The entries were just heartbreaking. It makes me think back to Virginia Tech and Columbine. It's crazy how often this stuff happens. When you introduce a little more drama in each chapter, I get instantly hooked. This whole thing is just.........gah, too great for words!
I always found it amusing when people welcomed new neighbors with food. In my opinion, they should screw the cookies and bring over a pie. Or some cake. :XD
I love the way it's written and I like the plotline, though it's really sad. I like how Ben's character is portrayed through all the memories. It seems crazy to think that he'd do something so terrible, because from the way he's described, he seemed like a nice kid.
Well, anyways, I think your story is really good and I'd love to read more. :D