You're My Way Home, You're My Backbone. - Comments

Sad day for me, having just read the epilogue to this very wonderful story. I loved every moment of it. You are amazing.

And I would like you to write some oneshots about this AU. :D

I'll go check out other of your works now that I'm finished reading this one.

I'm only a few chapters in, but I thought I'd comment before I continue on!

I don't see many cancer fics around, and I really like how you've started this one off. Brendon's worrying and emotions were really realistic for what he's going through so that was really nice to read. I love how worried his friends are, too. It seems like he has such a good relationship with them. I don’t know much about the P!ATD fandom, but I like to think all the band members are friends

I did notice some mistakes, mostly typos or the wrong word in certain places. But other than that it looks good! Nice job

I only read the first chapters, but I liked it! I will definitely come again and read the whole story before I got to bed haha!

I've only read the first three chapters, but I want to go ahead and leave a comment for Take a Comment, Leave a Comment.
I didn't really have a lot of notes for chapter one itself, except this:
On the bus it was pretty rear to find the back lounge empty of people, even when the bus was parked, so the moment that Brendon walked in to find the room still, he quickly dashed back to his bunk and pulled out a shopping that had been hidden there at least a week, maybe two –This part has some errors that make it hard to understand. I’m assuming “rear” is supposed to be “rare”, but I’m just guessing because that’s what would make the most sense. The part that says “pulled out a shopping” is confusing to me; I have no idea what that’s supposed to say.
And also:
I really liked the ending of the first chapter. I think it was a perfect way to set up the rest of the story. It set the right tone and foreshadowed beautifully. I also loved how the scene transitioned so smoothly from a fluffy fun time to something darker; it made the dread at the end that much more intense. My heart broke just a little bit for Brendon.
My notes for chapter 2 are as follows:
I’m noticing typos and spelling errors in this chapter as well. They aren’t keeping me from understanding or making it too hard to read, but I’d still recommend going back over the story and/or having someone else like a beta do it.

Spencer called Ryan?! I so didn’t see that coming (although really I should have.) I’m interested to see where this is going… I’m interested to see the role that he plays in this story (as well as the other guys.)

I expected answers in the second chapter, but I’m actually glad he didn’t get any results right away because that’s more realistic. Also, it makes me more eager to read the second chapter.
And my notes for chapter 3:
Something I’ve noticed in all these chapters so far is there’s a lot of what looks like British English, which I personally think is alright in narration, but it would probably be a good idea to have someone American look over the story to help keep the dialogue authentic.

You did a really good job of establishing mood in this chapter. I could really feel the tension. My heart even started beating faster when Brendon got the phone call from the doctor!

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Overall, I would say this is a pretty good story that could be made even better with further revision and/or the help of a beta. It’s fairly interesting and compelling, and you have a definite strength when it comes to establishing mood and conveying emotions of characters. There are just some errors that make the story a little less readable. I might keep reading though!

Aw. I love it. I would've posted a new comment sooner, but I haven't been on here in a few days. Can I just say Brendon and Jon forever? I love those two! Though, I was reading back through my comments and apparently found I liked Ryan and Brendon together first! Funny how things change. I'm so glad this isn't over yet. I will be so upset when this is over.

Aw. Brenny-bear, can I give you a big hug?

When I first started reading, I was thrown off a bit by the more, I think British? language. IT WASN'T BAD OR ANYTHING, lol. I'm just not used to reading stories like that. I actually really liked it. You are very descriptive and it really got me into the story and into the scenes. I don't know much about Panic!, but I really like it so far.

This story is amazing at making my chest ache and feel emotions and such. Great chapter!

I've been reading this story for a while and every day I check back to see if there is a new chapter. You're an amazing writer and this story is just totally awesome

This is really good. There are definitely some issues when it comes to some of the grammar and spelling, but that'd be an easy fix if you were go read back through it all. You've done a really good job at portraying his emotions, so good that I find myself a bit frustrated with him for taking so long to go do the doctor's. I'm glad he finally told them though. I love how supportive they are. I've only read up to chapter 5 and I don't really plan to read more, but it'd be quite easy to get sucked into it if I was in the fandom. Good job and good luck finishing this!

This is really good. There are definitely some issues when it comes to some of the grammar and spelling, but that'd be an easy fix if you were go read back through it all. You've done a really good job at portraying his emotions, so good that I find myself a bit frustrated with him for taking so long to go do the doctor's. I'm glad he finally told them though. I love how supportive they are. I've only read up to chapter 5 and I don't really plan to read more, but it'd be quite easy to get sucked into it if I was in the fandom. Good job and good luck finishing this!

Oh my goodness. I love you. That chapter 36 makes me so happy, though they still do not know if Brendon is going to be okay or not. Did I ever mention how talented of a writer I think you are? I don't want this story to end, as I've said before. Thank you for still updating when you can. :D

No. NO. NO! NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! I swear this story is going to be the death of me. I think I shall go sit in a corner and die now. That last update is scaring me so bad. I thought things were going to be done, and now he's really sick. Poor poor baby. Let him live. I'm begging you.

I didn't even know you had updated. I'm sorry. Still reading though.

Poor baby. If I could be there, I'd give him a big hug.

Okay I would like to start by telling you you are an amazing and talented writer. This is one of the best stories I've read and by far the best panic one. Please don't keep me in suspense for too long. I'm dying to know what Brendon wrote.

I'm still reading. Like I said, this is my favorite story here on Mibba and it's going to upset me when the last chapter comes. Brendon and Spencer together made me smile. I know Jon couldn't be there because of where he is, but he and Brendon have the cutest relationship.

This story is amazing. You're a great writer, and it's great waiting for the next update.

I loved how Brendon teased Jon about having to get his leg cut off. :)

Can't wait to read more.

Just read the complete story and you literally made me cry....

Ahhhh!!!! I'm so happy again. This story is adorable. I'm glad the operation was successful. I love Brendon and Ryan together. :D So, when Jon was there when Brendon woke, not Ryan, I went: No!

At least someone was there, though.

Anyways, I really do not want this story to end. This story is by far my favorite on Mibba right now. :D

Okay. I know I said you were going to make me cry. You have. Reading this story makes me sad, yet happy. I love the relationships between the band members and how much they all care about Brendon.

My feels. Ugh. You're going to make me cry with this story. I'm a new reader, but I liked it so much that I didn't stop reading until I reached the last chapter you have up right now. Really good job. Can't wait to read more.