Meet With the Devil - Comments

The dreaded elephant thought. That made me laugh every time!!

I LOVED this story. Seriously. I was laughing out loud more times than I could count! When you told me it was a romance, I wasn't expecting something as bubbly and comedic as this. It really is a refreshing break from a ton of soppy romance stories that I've read in the past, haha!

The characters are just amazing. I became so attached to them when I was reading the story, and the little hints of John having a crush on Anna were just too much for me to handle! I really do ship them!

Your style of writing in this story really does help to grip the reader. I don't mind that the chapters are long, because you break it up with the characters' thoughts in short sentences. That's good! Oh, and of course, your dialogue is great too. The characters' quips had me laughing so many times!

I don't really have any constructive criticism or feedback so far because this story is just so GOOD! But, I'll subscribe and read your updates, and let you know if there's anything that I pick up on those. Nice work!

@ Tipsy Returns
In my opinion no. Especially since she is unique it would have almost any man intrigued

@ Brianna Marie
Yayy thank you! I guess the hard work is paying off a bit haha
I think the full blown romance will be drastic for me.. it's already freaking me out thinking about it haha Also, is the liking part proceeding too fast? I mean, is John responding too quickly? Idk...

I love the longer chapters! I think so far you're doing the romance perfectly. There are hints, but it isn't drastic too fast. I love it! I do hope to see a little more hints later too ;) you know, wink wink. Haha. It's great so far! Once you build up the hints of them liking each other, then you can just go full blown romance and you won't have to come up with any more tricky hints. :)

@ Moon Lady Hina
Yep I know, that's why I was lmao It happened with me and Maria, we were trying to rec each other's stuff, but Mibba was so persistent on not letting us do it haha That made it so funny!

@ Tipsy Returns
Unreccing usually happens when we're trying to recc the story again. It happens. ANd given that mibba's lagging again. or rather acting slowish, it's prone to happen.

I meant to say bound. XD Aha ype. Mission accomplished indeed. :3

@ Moon Lady Hina
You found it less funny! Yayy! That's mission accomplished! haha I was aiming at it, since I didn't want Anna to come across as someone without any brain haha XD Thanks for the comment! And btw, Hina, you unrecc'd it again! Bwahahaha

@ Brianna Marie
YAyyy! That's like the second best comment I ever received on a romance. YayyyYayyy and yayyyy again haha! XD Thank you sooo much! (:

This story really is a breath of fresh air. It feels like I can just lay in my bed, relax and just read this and get a nice laugh. I love the main character, she is so different and quirky and this story is just MMMM! Simple and fun to read! I can't wait to read the next!

Aha alrighty. XD And you're welcome. :)

Before I begin the comment for chapter 4 I'm gonna warn you now that I just woke up so it may make any sense or w/e and I may just ramble. XD Ok? Ok.

I really found this chapter to be slightly less funny but than again, Anna's being a little serious in this chapter, and that's a good thing. Sometimes a funny character has to be serious (but all the time that it takes away from their comedic personality --- does that makes sense? XD). And I like that that there was a secret discussion about Anna. I wonder what Vane and John did say? >:) I shall wait for the next chapter! Sleepy Hina out!

@ Moon Lady Hina
Haha I had fun writing it, and thanks for the comment! The secretary part starts after chapter 4 haha

@ Brianna Marie
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! <3

@ Post Mortem
Yaayyy! I'm so happy, like really really? Hahaha But...um... you unrecc'd it!

I'm totally reading this when I get home. I subscribed.

Oh my goodness I loved this last chapter, it was hilarious! I can't wait to see where this is going. Do I smell love in the air? I'm excited about this story! Keep up the humor and great work! :)

Omg! Anna's done it again! She pissed John off and dragged her friend into it. This is really hilairious and to be honest, this chapter was really funny, especially with Vane rambling about Anna giving John a bucket full of tea. XD I'm wondering how Anna will handle being John's personal secretary.

You're welcome! I just hope Anna's not really fired. I root for the underdogs.

@ Oolong'sPantiesHina
Thank you Hina! I'm glad you enjoyed! And really, I really love Anna as well haha

Oh my god! Anna! She's so funny and absentminded! What the hell? Agh poor Anna got fired?! Can I kick John's ass? No? Okay then. Personally, you gotta love her enthusiasm for her job. I'd be that energetic too but John... I wouldn't want him as my boss. He seems to.... stiff. >< I'm wondering whether John's just testing Anna. Hopefully she's not literally fired. You did a great job with this chapter, Tipsy! I'll be waiting to read more. :)

@ Tipsy Returns
Love you, too. I think you're just a bit hard on your abilities in writing romances. But then again I feel your pain when I'm trying to write horror or action. You're welcome.

@ Brianna Marie
Thank you so much! I'm so lucky really really! Thank you!

@ Oolong'sPantiesHina
Hina, I really love you! This is the bestest comment I received on a romance! I'm so lucky to have you! Thank you!

I don't even know what to say haha. I'm curious as to why she keeps getting on top of tables xD something hocus pocus-y is going on here!

At first I will be honest (not trying to demean or be rude about your characters) I didn't really like Anna when I found out she was actually older than 7 (I imagined her being a child), but a little bit later in the chapter I kind of admire her for being childish and different from all the dull proper adults.

But this idea is so interesting. I can't wait for more :D

Oh wow. OMG! This is hilarious! I love Anna! She kinda seems like me when I get excited, only I don't start climbing up on things. I'm sorry, but Tipsy, but you are far too hard on yourself when it comes to writing. This is a great story and I can't wait til you update it!