Thirteen - Comments

Ermmm... wow, reading this actually brought tears to my eyes. This is an amazing piece filled with emotion and it holds the readers attention all the way until the end... I'm surprised that this doesn't have more comments to be honest. Amzing job!

I really adore your writing, and the way your words simply flow. You say an enormous amount, with very little. That speaks volumes about you, as a writer.

This piece, while dark, is very intricate and morbidly beautiful. It's sad, depressing, terrible - because things like this happen all the fucking time. Every bit of this is like taboo; don't talk about it, don't think about it, don't write about it - and then, maybe, it won't be real. But it is, it's very real and very much a problem.

Your delivery was flawless. I don't even know what else to say other than that.

Holy shit. Just wow. *Applause*

Wow..............just wow. I felt sad reading the entire thing.....sad for the kid who did it, and the ones who lost their lives. Very well done!

omg thats intenseXDXXD