The Echo in My Head - Comments

@ Forgetful-Insomniacs
Thank you. You have been here since the beginning and you stuck it through. Honestly I can't even be sad about Blaze cause he finally got Annie as his. Its actually over thought. I might do a sequel about Shakia and Kyle, but idk

Oh my God it's over i can't yes actually i can this was possibly the best ending ever i mean yeah I'm sad about blaze but this was still amazing i guess it's farewell to this story then dudette i am positive i will always look forward to your stories

@ Forgetful-Insomniacs
Ik I'm sorry. I've been working on a few things and a new story called The Love Triangle.

Yaaaaaaay I love it welcome back to this story I missed it

Yeah n lol. O
I'm working on anotha chapter now. Don't know when I'm gonna post though I'm sick

@ Mrs.JamesMaslow
You okay? And don't worry about it my phone just put tiki for you...I don't even know

@ Forgetful-Insomniacs
Yeah I have to fix her name. Sorry about that. Autocorrect did cthat. Glad u enjoyed that chapter though

I feel like I'm floating after reading that chapter like just floating in space simply observing this is a good chapter quick but good I really enjoyed it and I'm sympathizing with her character (Shaki) AND BRIAN GOT WHAT HE DESERVES hmph hurting that girl he's officially labeled worse then a twat in my book but now the baby Caramel's there too yaaaaaaay *does a happy dance*

@ Mrs.JamesMaslow
Shaki is definitely one of my favorites, ok fine I'm blushing, thank you and you think I'm sweet I'm pretty sure you're one of the kindest humans I've talked to, I think I'm going to dream up every possible scenario now if you will excuse me

@ Forgetful-Insomniacs
I like Shaki. I let u name her because from this point on she is your character. Personally included just for you. Enjoy and sweet dreams

You've rendered me speechless which is next to impossible I'm not kidding either like my brain doesn't even know what to say seriously so names I've got three of them if she's beautiful and sarcastic Shaki, if she's kind and angelic Angel, if she's mean and deceitful Akuma. Shaki is I believe Ethiopian I can never remember what language but either way it means beautiful, Angel would be fitting if she were some form of an angel which who I hope she had brought it seems only fitting, and Akuma is Japanese for demon/devil also fitting... As you can tell I will probably hold off on naming my kids for like three weeks AFTER they're born

You've rendered me speechless which is next to impossible I'm not kidding either like my brain doesn't even know what to say seriously so names I've got three of them if she's beautiful and sarcastic Shaki, if she's kind and angelic Angel, if she's mean and deceitful Akuma. Shaki is I believe Ethiopian I can never remember what language but either way it means beautiful, Angel would be fitting if she were some form of an angel which who I hope she had brought it seems only fitting, and Akuma is Japanese for demon/devil also fitting... As you can tell I will probably good off on naming my kids for like three weeks AFTER they're born

@ Mrs.JamesMaslow
EXACTLY I hate being mean but I still am sometimes admittedly part of my nature I guess... but then again I always apologize in some quiet and nine times out of ten you wouldn't know I had done whatever it was I'd done but still I'm in no way a pushover unless it's my home life then I'm just straight up passive

@ Forgetful-Insomniacs
Despite everything I am kind. Which is why my characters are all sweet in their own way. I hate being mean, I see no point in it.

http://www.mibba.com/Poems/Read/327735/Thankful-for-the-Quietest-Echoes-Inside-my-Head/ there goddamn that was heavy I had to carry that in my head all day now to respond to the second reply I think, I'm not blushing and would not hide behind someone due to what you said thank you like really I kinda keep getting surprised by you being kind after a month of basically being untrusting of everyone even when I honestly wanted to trust quite a few people I couldn't but honestly (this is the funniest pun I think it's called ever) you came in like a wrecking ball(ok I'm done I had to I'm sorry... My sister had it playing just now) and drilled straight through my wall thank you and since you read that Christmas nightmare dressed as a daydream (ok I'm not sorry about this one) thank you for making me smile harder then I have in a month hell probably two seriously thank you

@ Forgetful-Insomniacs
U make me want make this absolutely perfect. U should be happy whatever I write from this point on is with u in mind. Everyone of your comments makes me smile a mile a minute. I'm dedicating this entire story to you. You've been loyal since day one and the reason I continue to write it. Thank you.!

Wow seriously this should be published in a library as a number 1 best seller worldwide you keep blowing my mind away with wonderful albeit deep and sometimes downright sad things but oh how I wouldn't change a thing I've seriously got to finish this peom inspired by you

This is fucking beautiful I can try as hard as I want but I will never be able to describe it better then that seriously you brought tears to my eyes and I can't decide if I'm happy or sad god this is wonderful, beautiful, extraordinary, amazing, just everything it's realistic and raw it doesn't sugar coat shit it's just absolutely positively fucking sweet

@ aubree james
The setting is after the death of her father, but everything is like it's currently happening. Except for the flashbacks. If it's not a flashback then it's most likely happening right then and there. I hope that helps.

I like the context and symbolism to do with the dude Echo and the echoes she has in her head, it's cool! You've got some pretty good descriptions, and I like that the narrator is pretty detached from the text! I'm confused about your setting though.

I thought this was originally set post-secondary, but then when Kitty raised her hand to go to the bathroom, or the cafeteria thing, I got confused. Could you explain the aging and stuff to me? Thanks!