He Loves Me Not. - Comments

@ Sassenach
Oh my goodness, your comment made me smile so wide. Thank you so much!

Oh god, this was gory an detailed and I loved reading it. The description was amazing, I could see everything happening. All I could think while reading this was "Stephen King"

I found the secret line in the summary.

This is such a twisted story, but I seriously loved it! That probably made me seem twisted too, but I guess that's true to a certain extent. It's such a well-written piece! You include all the gory details and do a brilliant job with your description. I didn't read the prequel, so I didn't know any background to the story, but it was really gripping to see Pandora's motive unfold as the story went on.

Seriously, this is a great story you have here! I can't think of a single thing you could improve on. Definitely recommending!

@ A. J.
The other one was the first that I posted. But they're so similar at the end that the beginning of this one is all that I was worried about when I posted it. So don't worry. Thank you so much for your comment. It made me so happy.

oops, i read the other one first, but this one is even better. Cleo got what she deserved (in your story) Maybe i'm a psychopath too. lol Loving this fiction. =)