All of Me - Comments

While I feel slightly bad for her dad since it seems like maybe he does care, now is not a time for him to be feeling sorry for himself. And if he sees how much stress he's causing her he needs to back off. He waited this long I'm sure he can wait a little while longer. And I'm happy that Colin was able to see that declan is needed too and that they need to work together instead of taking her all for himself. I'm so excited to see if they really are about to share!

Loved this recent chapter! It's good to see Declan and Colin sharing the chaos and trying to devise a plan to patch up all the hurt Bonita has felt in such a short time. Wonderful read!

Workers! I just have to take a moment to appreciate that Colin is willing and able to see past what he would want and know what Bonita actually needs, that she loves and needs them both and that they both love her. So wonderful. I'm excited for the next part!

Forgive Declan!! Can we have stupid Wendy killed?!?
Bad timing her dad walking in. He really has no clue the suffering ! If he's so rich he should have had a private investigator find them

I'm all caught up now and I feel so many feels!!
Everything is happening all at once, I would need to be sedated too! I do hope she'll swallow her pride with Declan. He's too important to lose just because some slimy conniving bitch tried to sink her claws into him.

I'm only finishing chapter 22 but man, that was so enticing! Yes, I think that's the word I want to use. I can't wait to see who she chooses in the end.

This chapter was so emotional ! Bonita father has found out where she been but has cause her world to be upside down. I mean all this stress has caused her to be in the hospital. I hope she will be okay. Great update :)

Such a good chapter, so hard to read but so good! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Ugh Declan you idiot!!! I don't even care what stupid excuse he has. She needs to get to Colin. And her father?! What a scumbag. Can't wait to see what happens next.

This chapter was so heartbreaking
First Bonita discovered her dad has a new family and is living the life while her and her brother are struggling. At only that she found Wendy and Declan kissing which I'm really possible that Wendy was the one to start this.
I hope things work out for Bonita and she gets that happiness she deserves.
Great update :)

Omg wow completely heartbreaking :( hope Wendy and her father get what is coming to them...what horrible people. But can't wait to find out what happens next.

Well this was heartbreaking :/

Declan is adorable!

I lIke how Declan got all flustered, it was adorable. Also, super proud of him for standing up to Wendy!! Great update! Can't wait to see the finishing of this story!

I love this update. I appreciate Colin being totally selfless for Bonita and for Declan being there too hold her and telling her how he feels. This was amazing and I absolutely am jazzed to the ceiling to see what happens next. Especially with that hint of Declan thinking about sharing Bonita with Colin! Eeeep! I totally appreciate you writing this story for yourself because I think that makes a story greater, when it's special to you, is closet to your heart and it's genuine. And the genuine stuff is always the best. So you keep writing for you girl! I'm just grateful you're ok with sharing

Amazing update:) it good to see Bonita open up to Declan and let some her bottle up emotions out to someone. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I need more!!! D:

Ahh I get so excited when I see an update in my inbox. Loving your work. Just wanna prod Declan until he caves and shares.

*dies*

Oh Lordy. I really hope that Declan will share Bonitaaaaa!

wow! that was one hella emotional chapter! actually brought tears to my eyes. i think as far as the sharing goes, that they both have a bit of what she needs. i actually think it would work. awesome chapter, and i can't wait for the next one!