Do You See Me At All? - Comments

@ Your_love_drella_334
I did! I hope this helps with your future writing!

@ Synyster Vengance

Thank you so much...this contest was my first and it was really cool.
As for the errors, I'm sorry I hope you understood the story! I'll make the corrections as soon as possible! Thank you so much for the opportunity!

Hello! I'm here to judge your contest entry!

Overall:

This is definitely the cutest story I've read! I love the innocence and shyness of the main character, and how you carry it throughout the entire story.

Errors/Easy Fixes:

There were quite a few minor things that stood out to me, punctuation, spelling, and such, as well as some words that need to be replaced/edited out, but nothing majorly wrong.

Grammar:

Cue the war flashbacks! Your grammar overall was consistent, but there are a few things that need to and can be fixed with a word processor/checking website.

Current Placement:

Third

@ Andy_16gl
Ooh darling your words are flattering...gosh, any request and I will gladly do it! I swear, you're the best! Thanks love!

That was amazing!!! you're an amazing writer. :)

@ Andy_16gl
\(>.<)/ Oh, thank you so much! Hah, love to see that you recommend my stories! Thank you!

this is really good! can't wait for more!!! :)

@ savannahquinn13
Thank you so much! It means a lot to me!

this is great!