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  • white.OUT

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    i love this. i actually wanted more.
    September 6th, 2009 at 09:09am
  • bazooka tooth.

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    She reminded me of Luna Lovegood in the Harry Potter books.
    Exactly what I thought.

    It said not to comment this because it's been inactive for more than 30 days; but I thought you would like to hear that your one-shot was beautiful.
    June 4th, 2009 at 09:04am
  • wishfinder

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    AIMEE.

    I. Love. This. I sincerely do.

    The whole story was just so cute and interesting to read. Everytime I went to another sentence, I seek to read the next, and the next, and the next.

    I was just wondering what Lena was doing throwing corn kernels outside. :lmfao The whole distilling part of the beginning was transformed into some puzzling, humorous, and yet adorable bubble of miniscule proportions.

    The end is what made me feel all mushy inside the most. It was so cute how Lena started to be all flirtatious and Gee kept on hesitating. And the whole thing ended (as I should say) in a dozen roses. (:

    And I am so not reviewing this because I wanted to test your writing ability. :file:
    August 30th, 2008 at 08:57am
  • goldenyears.

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    I'm not usually a fanfic reader, but this was quite good. I liked the summary, I thought it was interesting.

    I really liked the female character in this.
    She reminded me of Luna Lovegood in the Harry Potter books. xD I mean, really.
    but she's really cute. And somehow believable.

    I also like how at the beginning you have "The letter he had just sent would, he knew, permanently damage the world."
    Great line. Makes you wonder what the hell he's done, you know? Mysterious. (:

    But my favourite part is:
    "I'd comfort you if you were sad. I would smile for you when you needed it. I would sing you to sleep. I would make you a fire to keep out the cold."
    ^_^ so cute.

    And the ending was good too.
    Oh and your spelling and grammar was nice as well.

    I like it.
    June 2nd, 2008 at 07:39pm
  • INKLET

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    That was a cute story. Just goes to show that kindness can go a long way. I really enjoyed the detailed simplicity of the one-shot, if that makes sense...
    June 2nd, 2008 at 03:50am
  • Don't!

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    That was really touching.
    I really liked it!
    June 1st, 2008 at 07:56am
  • Nightmare-Anatomy

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    I actually loved it, its really good
    May 31st, 2008 at 02:02pm
  • Twilightaholic

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    Like this x tis good x
    May 31st, 2008 at 01:55pm
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