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  • jcov

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    Oooh yes Madrid! Curious to read what happens next! AND YOU'VE BEEN QUOTING THE OTHER SIDE BY TONIGHT ALIVE OMFG, THEY ARE MY BAND YO!
    November 12th, 2014 at 07:32am
  • villa rosie

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    AHHH, MADRID!! Twitch
    (Let me know if you need any help with Spanish if you're planning on incorporating some! I've been learning it since I was four Con )

    I like the merry tone of this chapter, and how Summer is starting over again in Spain. Although, it's sad how Beau's not contacting her after all the phone calls made to him Sad
    How dare he! hahahah!

    Looking forward to the next chapter!!
    November 11th, 2014 at 03:02am
  • Thatmom

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    Madrid is definitely a beautiful city. Love her renewed sense of purpose:)
    November 10th, 2014 at 06:43pm
  • jcov

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    This is an amazing start, and definitely heart felt! I love your writing, and this opening chapter has me beyond curious of how things used to be between them and how things will be from now on. I really love this and I need you to update soon!!!!
    November 9th, 2014 at 05:42am
  • Thatmom

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    Great start!!!
    November 8th, 2014 at 05:15am
  • villa rosie

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    Gosh, this is so heartfelt. It's making my chest clench up because of the strong emotion presented just from the darn prologue, hahahah! Cute

    I really love how Summer and Beau interact; their relationship pulls me in. Especially now that Mr. Bennett left her for the Burgh! (What a meanie tehe )

    Can't wait to read more! You're doing such a fantastic job with this story already Arms
    Beeeeeaaaaauuuuuuu
    November 8th, 2014 at 01:28am
  • HawkGurl93

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    Love beau!! So excited for this. Heads up: it's marked as already completed... And unless you were just planning on writing a prologue, you might want to change that.
    November 7th, 2014 at 11:40pm
  • gurlygirl87

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    Love it so far!! :)
    November 7th, 2014 at 04:23pm
  • qwertyu123

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    This is gonna be one hell of a story!
    November 7th, 2014 at 06:05am
  • Phenax

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    WHAT THE ACTUAL . . . I CAN'T EVEN.
    I-I, but, Beau. D:
    This is depressing. But in a bittersweet kinda way. I love it. <3
    November 7th, 2014 at 03:27am
  • hockey718729

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    Love it so far!
    November 7th, 2014 at 03:07am