Oh my goodness. I normally don't read really short works, but I am so glad I made an exception. You are an absolutely fantastic writer; from your vocabulary to your writing style, right up to some of the analogies you use ("She almost seemed painful too look at, like staring stupidly at the sun."). I will definitely be going back and reading some of your longer works. The one which caught my eye right-off was "Fiction". Can't wait for you to put out more - I will definitely be following along. Best wishes!