March 1st, 2016 at 06:32pm
I've been waiting for this for almost a month and it does not disappoint. I love a good story that isn't moving in a linear direction.
No dude, you do not need to be a hero to save her from some brutes showing up at her house and roughing her around. I think a warning of what was to come would have been nice instead of the pancakes.
Can't wait to see how this goes.
I loved the summary so much. It's informative, but doesn't give too much away. It's just beautifully worded and wow, my favorite!
Prologue:
Woah. The prologue was beautiful! It flowed super well and I wasn't expecting that ending at all, honestly. I didn't see any mistakes or anything of the sort.
I'm really wondering what happened to Olive. Who were the men dressed in black that, I'm assuming, are kidnapping her? Will Paxton ever come back? I'm definitely curious!
Great job and I hope you do more with this.