Okay, okay, let me start by saying I loveSupernatural. (Dean is my baby lol) I've never read a fanfic of it, so you're my first =) I like the simplicity of the layout and the banner is very epic and spooky.
So here I go, plunging into the deep.
Chapter 1: Dang, I love this. lol (my little sister had a dream that sounds nearly like this. But I could never do a fanfic of the show, so I'm glad someone has it written)
So, I'll start off with saying, I love how she automatically takes to Dean. Though I feel like he'd be reluctant to work with someone else (Since it's mostly the duo, ya know?) But I'm anxious to know where this goes. I'll certainly be subbing and reading more!
This is the first Supernatural Fanfic I've ever read. I really like what you're doing with the story and I love Kacey. :) I didn't outwardly notice any mistakes or inconsistencies. You're doing a great job, keep it up!
Kacey! Don't accept his invitation! Dean'll just want to get into your pants. LOL. Sorry for the weird comment, Mandy. I was just thinking out loud here. I'm on the first chapter and wow. A lot just went down in the chapter, not in a bad way but in a good way. And I'm in love with this story. I'm wondering who Kacey will fall in love with.
I really this, the only thing I caught was this "we was" it sounds off. I would always think "we were". Ex-we was playing. Ex-we were playing. Other then that its awesome :)
So here I go, plunging into the deep.
Chapter 1:
Dang, I love this. lol (my little sister had a dream that sounds nearly like this. But I could never do a fanfic of the show, so I'm glad someone has it written)
So, I'll start off with saying, I love how she automatically takes to Dean. Though I feel like he'd be reluctant to work with someone else (Since it's mostly the duo, ya know?) But I'm anxious to know where this goes. I'll certainly be subbing and reading more!