Niszczyciel - Comments

Hello! So I am here because someone recommended your story...
So I read the opening chapter, and I love it! It was very nicely written; the dream sequence didn't seem forced, and I could actually picture it like a movie of sorts. Her dream reminded me of the stories of Elizabeth Bathory...

The waking transition worked great here. And now I am intrigued as to what is happening to Nisa. Why is she having these nightmares? And what on earth do they mean?
The detailing you have is very nice. You paint the scene very nicely and my mind effortlessly followed the chapter as if to be watching it on screen. The chapter length was also a nice length for the first chapter.

Great work so far!!

How about you just constantly put out chapters to make me happy? :) I love this story! You portray Roman and Peter so well, and I love Nisa! She doesn't take anyone's shit. I really want her to explore her feelings more with Roman ;) UPDATE NOW PLEASE!!!

i cant wait to read more

Amazing story! Keep it up. Nisa is a cool character :)

@ CharDeeMacDennis
@ Blissed

Thank you! I hope I can keep it up! Haha

Loving this!!

Yay! I loved Hemlock Grove and I've been looking for a good story like crazy and you did not fail!! Update soon, I really enjoy your story :)

@ Abmora01
@ I.Munna.Eat.Chu!

Thank you two so much, I can't even tell you guys how much your comments mean to me!

please update soon

Ugh! Silly parents, always forgetting to tell their kids why they crave blood.

@ I.Munna.Eat.Chu!
I just want to say thank you! Your comment really made me realize I needed to update this story Thank you again!

This is amazing!!!

@ Abmora01
Oh my gosh, thank you so much. I'll try to update as soon as possible, promise.

i am not kidding i want to read so much more and soon please.....oh god this is amazing