September 21st, 2017 at 06:08am
Niszczyciel - Comments
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How about you just constantly put out chapters to make me happy? :) I love this story! You portray Roman and Peter so well, and I love Nisa! She doesn't take anyone's shit. I really want her to explore her feelings more with Roman ;) UPDATE NOW PLEASE!!!April 27th, 2015 at 10:25am
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i cant wait to read more
April 26th, 2015 at 11:51am -
Amazing story! Keep it up. Nisa is a cool character :)April 26th, 2015 at 02:49am
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@ CharDeeMacDennis
@ Blissed
Thank you! I hope I can keep it up! Haha
April 26th, 2015 at 02:10am -
Loving this!!April 25th, 2015 at 04:26pm
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Yay! I loved Hemlock Grove and I've been looking for a good story like crazy and you did not fail!! Update soon, I really enjoy your story :)April 25th, 2015 at 03:08pm
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@ Abmora01
@ I.Munna.Eat.Chu!
Thank you two so much, I can't even tell you guys how much your comments mean to me! April 24th, 2015 at 12:37pm -
please update soonApril 24th, 2015 at 12:40am
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Ugh! Silly parents, always forgetting to tell their kids why they crave blood.April 23rd, 2015 at 01:49pm
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@ I.Munna.Eat.Chu!
I just want to say thank you! Your comment really made me realize I needed to update this story
Thank you again! April 23rd, 2015 at 11:26am -
This is amazing!!!April 22nd, 2015 at 07:38pm
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@ Abmora01
Oh my gosh, thank you so much. I'll try to update as soon as possible, promise. December 18th, 2014 at 10:02am -
i am not kidding i want to read so much more and soon please.....oh god this is amazingDecember 18th, 2014 at 12:41am
So I read the opening chapter, and I love it! It was very nicely written; the dream sequence didn't seem forced, and I could actually picture it like a movie of sorts. Her dream reminded me of the stories of Elizabeth Bathory...
The waking transition worked great here. And now I am intrigued as to what is happening to Nisa. Why is she having these nightmares? And what on earth do they mean?
The detailing you have is very nice. You paint the scene very nicely and my mind effortlessly followed the chapter as if to be watching it on screen. The chapter length was also a nice length for the first chapter.
Great work so far!!