Hold Me Close, Don't Let Go - Comments

@ TheNerdScene
Well I'm working on another oneshot, so hopefully that'll be done soon. Good luck with your Fuenciado stuff!

@ KellicOnMyGravestone
That helps a LOT, thank you <3 I hope you write more fics 'cause I'd definitely read them :D

@ TheNerdScene
Well I wrote this about 2 momths ago, before I had read any chaptered fics. At first, it was kind of boring when I tried to over-read it, but then I realized what the problem was. It needed more dirty talk. Actually, all of my fics did. The reason why it's so helpful is because it makes the actual intercourse part seem like it's a lot longer than it actually is. Second, it spices everything up and it makes your fic longer overall. Other than dirty talk, it's cool if you start your fic off with a tiny bit of smut (if it's going to be a smutty fic) and then take the tiny bit of smut out until you finish building up sexual tension, THEN bring it back with full force XD I hope that helps :)

@ KellicOnMyGravestone
This was fab, and the smut was pretty great too. I kinda wanna try write some Fuenciado, but I've never done smut before; got any tips, oh great creator of smut?

@ TheNerdScene
Lmaooo don't feel bad, I still laugh every time I reread it XD

holy fuck, "aww, shit, I missed it?" I laughed so hard, you don't understand XD

@ Your_love_drella_334
Thank you!! The fact that you called me a great writer gives me so much motivation. :)

That was a fucking awesome ending...I'm currently in an airport and I almost died in laughter. Fucking hilarious! So perfectly done...how ironic! Hahahaha!
You're a great writer, I'll give you that!

@ NephthysPhoenix
Thanks :) Vic's such a little slut lol

LOL the ending. Awesome fic :)