She Screams in Silence - Comments

  • blue.

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    You probably will never read this (unfortunately), considering you wrote this story ages ago and I realize that I'm really talking to no one right now—but in the off chance that you do come across this one day, I would like to tell you that this is a wonderful story. Lengthy, funny, natural, exciting, interesting. You did everything right. And I love it! When I get older and get nostalgic for my Billie Joe Fanfiction days, I know this story is one of the ones I will return to. So thank you :)
    March 13th, 2013 at 04:06pm
  • pluginababy08

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    i have just discovered this story and i can honestly say its the best BJA story i have read :) i know you haven't updated in over a year but please don't give up on it. i'm dying to know what happens!!!!
    October 31st, 2009 at 09:47am
  • MLC33

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    LOVE THIS STORY!
    June 18th, 2009 at 08:01am
  • Tre Cool

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    I love this story. Seriously, it's one of the best BJA fanfics i've read, and i've read a lot. I hug you through the internet.
    October 19th, 2008 at 05:43am
  • Straight-outta-Dodge

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    Ive just recently checked out this story, and the truth of the matter is, i'm addicted and as that last chapter rolled around the corner, i found it hard to understand that my two 'lovers' during my very ill week off school have disapeared for a while.
    But on a serious note, this is an amazing piece of writing and not to sound like a high school teacher here, but you really show an amazing talent.
    Please Please, Please, i beg off you. Write more.......and i will be forever grateful.
    (sorry for the bad grammar and spelling, but typing a message so long on an Iphone, is way harder than it seems)
    October 5th, 2008 at 08:55pm
  • shakethesky

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    please please do NOT and right there!
    This is my favourite sotry ever!
    October 2nd, 2008 at 02:26am
  • vicky

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    I just recently found this story and ive finally got to the last posted chapter - I loved it and i can't wait for an update :) Its so happy. i like happy :)
    September 29th, 2008 at 10:54pm
  • Beautifully Tainted

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    CONTINUE IT!! Well I mean.. If you want to stop, stop but It would be really more great if you continue the story, this story is just freaking amazing to just stop there. =D Hugs Mary
    August 30th, 2008 at 04:22pm
  • Straight-outta-Dodge

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    this is pretty good! i loved indulging into your characters lives!
    Keep writing, ive subscribed also. =-)
    August 28th, 2008 at 08:32pm
  • Pinhead

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    You should continue!
    August 28th, 2008 at 07:06pm
  • peacemaker.

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    As most of the others that have posted here, I totally encourage you to write the last 3 or 4 chapters as you originally planned to! I'd love to see more Billie and Felicity (:
    August 28th, 2008 at 06:08am
  • MissKittyHollow

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    I think you should drag this story out, definitely. The last chapter would make a good closer, but I want to hear about the wedding, and the reaction !
    August 28th, 2008 at 02:57am
  • trechic

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    As much as I hate to see this beautiful story ending, I think the closure was more than good enough for me.
    As a reader I really want more, but as a writer, I don't see the point of reading filler chapters. (IF) The story line is over, and we all now know what waits ahead for Billie and Felicity. But knowing you (not really knowing YOU but the writer you) you wouldn't write anything that wasn't worth reading.
    So; I'm not saying you shouldn't write anymore, but I'm asking as a reader from you to keep making our toes curl in our pink fuzzy slips and go AWWW.
    So it's up to you...
    lots of love,
    TreChic
    August 27th, 2008 at 08:10pm
  • runaways-fear

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    dont end it hear
    continue to write it please
    x
    August 27th, 2008 at 04:27pm
  • asphyxiate

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    I think you should continue on with the three or four chapters you planned to write out.
    I'd really love to see/read Billie and Felicity's wedding! (:
    And then maybe Tre's and Cat's wedding as well if you intend to go that far with the final chapters.
    August 27th, 2008 at 03:10pm
  • HeroesAndThieves

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    Continue writing! Don't end it here!
    August 27th, 2008 at 12:42pm
  • Flo.

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    I think it would be great to read some more about Felicity and Billie ^. - I didn't consider Chapter 25 as the ending, so... I guess I'd rather stay with 'You should write more' ^^
    August 27th, 2008 at 11:41am
  • Mickey Avalon

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    moremoremore!!!

    puh lea seee!
    August 27th, 2008 at 11:27am
  • MissKittyHollow

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    HOLY SHIT, YOUR BACK! This story is the highlight of my life. (Pitiful, but true-ish.)
    August 27th, 2008 at 03:17am
  • asphyxiate

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    Erin, I love you and your breathtaking story. I really do.
    And yes, that chapter was sappy. But I was smiling the entire time.
    It was exactly what I was waiting for! (:
    Amazing, amazing, amazing. You honestly have no idea.
    And I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter.
    August 26th, 2008 at 02:29pm