Country Heir - Comments

@ A. J.
Of course, I'm awesome
You're right about the cute thing. It would be like being fed honey and sugar together. Eww. Now I'll throw up xD haha
You know I hate it when romances don't have good endings. I mean, I feel stupid haha It's like, man, I read over 300 pages of this novel just to see the female/male lead die? Never reading romance again Happy endings forever after. Oh yeah.

You too take care! See ya! ^_^

@ Tipsy.
You are just too nice to me! =)
Thank you a thousand times over for reading and your awesome comments. Yes, even the 'I hate Levi' ones!
He came around and proved himself tho- redemption! haha.
I can't have two characters be cute, that would be puke worthy and cheesy. LOL I love sarcastic men. I'm one of them, how can I not? lol
Glad you liked the ending. I sometimes struggle with endings, but it seemed fitting, so thank you. <3
Take care of you. xx

Evening brother!! Sorry couldn't make it today morning, was working with Hina ^_^

ch13: Aw, I love the little time leap here. And because I'm in a too good mood, I think I'm not holding any grudges against Levi anymore. All good here, as long as they stick together. ^_^
I didn't want him to sell the Sidewinder. Not even to Keith. Oh well.
Haha, I love the kind of brat Erich is being. Not annoying, cute ^_^
No comment on Wyatt. I think this part of the chapter just gives an insight into Wyatt's past so that we can relate to him more in the sequel. ;)
Levi manipulates people so well haha Gavin is cute <3 Didn't guess Levi was the one to set them up. ^_^
"Method in my madness". Levi copycat hahaha I like him again!
All over a happy happy chapter. Totally cheered me up <3

ch14:Hahaha, Erich is so cute <3 I wonder why I still haven't said that about Levi, even after fourteen chapters? I guess it's just the smartass him haha
I love it when the scenery around Erich's home is described. It feels so peaceful just reading about it.
Alright, good compromise. Happy Happy <3 Now they'll be together all the year Cheesy as it sounds,I like happily ever afters.
I love rainfall <3
Aww man, that was such a perfect end <3

I can happily say that I'm going to miss this story, these wonderful characters so much. I hope they adopt a kid and raise him/her together too. That'd be so wonderful
Alright, hands down. I am cheesy when it comes to others' romance. ^_^ This was an amazing novel, so glad I got the chance to read it. Take care! And good luck on Country Pride.

Evening bro! Getting started right away!

ch10: Right now I love every other character more than Levi. Especially Damon. But because my review ( Believe me, I'm still laughing about that haha) on the last two chaps was simple whining on what a jerk L was being, I'll shut up till he acts better. In general, I don't like him anymore. Let's read further.
Okay, one more thiing. L even if you cry, Tipsy is hell bent on disliking ya!
Heh. Get a life Clint. You make me think badly of adults.

YAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!! Travis I love you!! A fight, finally!! I feel alive again hahahaha!! This has to be my fav scene in the last three chapters hahaha They beat that Clint up! They beat him up, they beat him up, they beat him up!! Yayyayyyayyyayyyayyyayyyayyyayyyy!! :D:D:D:D

People hve to be seriously idle to beat others up for no reason at all. I wonder why they don't die of their own stupidity. No offense.
I wish E didn't show up and T had punched Clint. Oh well, I got to see a fight, so I'll deal with it. That's probably what you're going to tell me to do anyway, eh bro? Hahaha
Damon you're too good. Just shut up, alright? L is just an idiot and no matter how many times you guys call each other brothers I'm still gonna dislike ya! Hell yeah! Watch out L, me mad!!

Hatred for Levi confirmed. Erich, Tipsy still loves ya.

ch11: This ass really came back! He didn't go after Erich! Someone please break my head or I swear I'll break his. For the hundredth time, I HATE YOU LEVI!!!
Can I mention something here? For an absolute idiot, isn't Levi surrounded by too many good people? Jeff and Jerome are sweethearts too. Levi, please get some sense back? I feel like a moron too now, cause I think I've only been repeating my dislike for you in the past three chapters. Please change?
Better for that, cause I sure as hell dun ask that from people I dun like.

Yayyy! He misses E! Dada! I'm wondering if I was being unreasonable after all? I mean California is his home, and everybody wants to return to people they love. So I'm thinking I might be wrong. Still I won't take back my words till Levi apologizes to Erich. That's a given.
Atleast he regrets who he has become.
AND E HAS TO CALL FIRST! DAMNIT!! At this rate I'm never gonna relike Levi
Erich, please stop being such a sweetheart. ARGHH! I'm going to pull out my own hair! See why I say romance is stupid? Real life people are like that too, I tell ya, making a fuss out of situations that could be SO easily solved.

I guess I can relate to Levi when he says that it would have been better if Erich had shouted instead of being civil. Okay, dislike meters falls from 10 to 9.9.
Isn't Levi being too rational now? And hell, if he says L.A. is my home once again, I sure will beat him up!
Oh man, E has to have an accident now!! Ah hah! Now that's a dramatic way to m ake our dumb Levi realize how important E is to him. I'm guessing he wll realize it when he sees E nearing death. And he'll obviously take a flight to get there, overcoming his fear of heights for E. Aiyahh! If that happens, dislike meter down to 8.
Yep, confirmed, he will take a flight, even though he doesn't seem that eager. Dislike meter down to 8 alright.

ch12: And I hope you don't kill me brother, for ranting on and on! I honestly mean no offense to you or the story when I utter my dislike for Levi. Your writing is stll amazing, and the fact that I am angry means you're a fantastic writer hahahaha I rarely harbor such feelings in a romance. Beleive me, while I read shoujo manga, I keep thinking, how stupid over and over again. Sometimes though, they get to me and I'm all happy/angry/sad haha. Have you heard of Skip Beat?

Even though I know E won't die bro, let me still warn ya. I WILL kill ya if anything happens to him. And afterwards, I'll throttle Levi.
Did I mention, I love the name Keith! I've always loved it, ever since I was 12 hahahaha xD
Travis, man I love you more!! It was worth it to make a total fool out of Levi hahahaha!! Dislike meter down to 7.8.
Finally a cute moment <3 I love their conversation.
"You don't fly."
"No, I don't, but airplanes do."
"That's a stupid joke."
Aiyahh! <3 Dislike meter down to 7! :D:D:D
Haahh??? What did he tell Erich in his ear??? TELL ME!! NO FAIR!! Tell me, tell me tell me!! Levi, you *************!!! And I dun think any abusive word is that long omg haha

MMMNAANNANANANAANAANANANA!! I wanna read further!! But with the look mum is giving me... see ya in the morning brother. Just when I was about to read the climax... Atleast the idiot admitted he loved Erich though! Hahahahaha
That's it, dislike meter down to 5!!

See ya bro~ I hope you take an aspirin tomorrow morning so that you won't be too light headed from my ranting hahaha

@ A. J.
It's that Wyatt... I might as well throttle you for that But because it says he has become cynical because he's heartbroken, I will deal with it for now until I get to the second book. I better force myself to like him somewhat in this book, that is if he makes an appearance again. Also, I call every main character a 'hero'. You better not be picking a fight here about it.
Ah hah! Also, if my rant is going to be honored as 'review', be my guest bro! You can happily read my reviews on the rest of the chapters! Haha, here we go ~

Btw, keep smiling. I like it when people are happy. Better than gloomy mojo jojo. xD

ch8: That has to be the mildest faceoff between an older and younger brother hahaha E sure is a calm man.
THIS CLINT WAS GOING TO CUT LEVI!! This shi**y a*hole!! Kill him! Aj, kill him off in this chapter!! And E you better lock up Travis! The moron doesn't even realize he was wrong! He's still defending himself and his stupid friends. Arghh! Are adults really that stupid??

Ok, ok, ok. I take that back haha. T realizes his mistake, and the face off isn't mild. I love E more now, he'd be such a good leader ^_^

Damon, right now I could hug you a hundred times! So straight forward! I love that <3 L, please stop acting like an idiot. I like you enough to ignore the fact that you're getting on my nerves. And if you hurt E, I swear I'll kill both you and that Clint.

Bwahahahahaha!! "Dammit, when it rains it pours. What the hell does he want?" This is one of the best lines L has said till now hahaha Although his dialogue is usually witty, this one was awesome!
Even though they're friends, L never fails to show Damon that he's boss. I dunno if I like or dislike that. Depends on the circumstance I guess.
" you'll be out on your ass so fast you won't know what hit you, but you can bet your ass it was me." L's dialogues rock in this chapter!

L is acting like more of a brat than even I do. Which is hard Can he please stop yelling at Damon? I can't sympathize with idiots. >:( L, don't make me dislike you for being rude to friends cause you're frustrated. :(

All over an okie dokie chapter. I liked E and T's confrontation. L annoyed me. Please sort yourself out my friend. Tipsy likes you, plus you're intelligent too. Doesn't suit you. >:(

ch9: What's this Gang Gang they're eating? Never heard of it before xD E is direct and stright forward. L, you better man up or I'll keep comparing the two of you. And comparing people is a horrible thing!
I AM SO PISSED!! I hope this won't lead to a lot of angst and drama, just cause L is a coward. So much for all my previous appreciation!! If he doesn't straighten up right now, I take everything back! HELL YEAH!!
I still love E <3 Good hero. L = idiot. >:(

Aw, Erich! Such a good guy! I'll hate hate and HATE Levi forever if he messes up with our Erich!

HE PUT THE SIDEWINDER ON SALE!!!! NO, DAMNIT, NO!!! And yes, he's thinking right! He is the biggest asshole on earth! And I'm not gonna use ** in the word too, you idiot! I hate him. He's acting worse than Clint if you ask me. Atleast that other idiot isn't dishonest about his feelings!!
And he lied to E... I'm not sure I'll ever like Levi again unless he's grovelling before Damon and everyone he's hurt. Good job, mate! You have to be a total moron! >:(((

Going off for breakfast now, bro! See ya in the evening! ^_^

@ Tipsy.
yes, Levi is in his late 20's and thanks for reviewing as well as telling me about the *** and @@@ but i'm too lazy to change it so deal! hahah kidding hun.
Clint saying fairy is to show how idiotic and narrow-minded he is. he's just a dick.
You finally came to Erich. Yep, that's the 'hero' you wanted. =) although Levi doesn't know what he wants. :( As for Gavin, well, he finds someone in the second book. (ahem) that I've been posting on here. You probably won't like who it is, but it's my book, so again, deal. hahaha I LOVE telling you what to do. ROFL
Many thanks on taking time out of your busy schedule to comment. I have a huge smile on my face. xoxoxo <3

Back and back again~ xD

ch6: Levi was so rude to Steph. She was only trying to be nice. Guys in general are morons, I tell ya. Also, why's he denying Erich because he has to go away? There's something called long distance rel. too.
I really like Levi, despite him acting like an idiot on more than one occasion. He's hard working and intelligent, plus he takes his work seriously. And he's a kind, good friend. More than enough reason to like a main character haha.

Hahaha, I love Erich, and I won't be surprised if I end up liking him over Levi as the story progresses. The man's good with words.

Clint got Levi... why'd you let that happen Aj? But good news is, Erich is strong, and I hope he'll beat them up in time. I hope he protects Levi. But still, I wanted to see a few bruises on this Travis at least... Anyway, nice job on helping Levi, Erich! (:

Travis is Erich's brother?! NOOO!! I PROTEST!! HELL NO!! And Levi, you'll be thrice darned if you blame it on Erich!! The man just saved you!
Dadada! Its decided, I do like Erich more for now! And I got to read a good scene haha

Hehe, this has to be my favorite chapter so far. Totally love E!

ch7: Woah, woah woah! Amazing description here! And nice setting ^_^
Dah! E has a list of requirements in a bf! Hahaha That's so good to read xD Plus he loves nature. Gawd, I love E, alright.
This chapter is so peaceful. I can almost feel myself in the quiet, surrounded by a fire. Wow. I might as well fall asleep haha
Yin and Yang. That's one quality (I know the wording is wrong, but you get me haha) I'd love to see in another person, and haven't come across in anyone yet, except my father. Levi = lucky guy! ^_^

Aiyaaah!!! Now that was graphic xD Tipsy is happy, but wants to kick Levi for having rude thoughts just because he "has to go". E is a sweetheart <3 Nice chapter!

Looking forward to more of this, need to go to work now! See ya later, Erich! *waving* And Levi, behave! Clint, go away! B-Bye :D

Morning bro!! Tipsy's here to harass you again! ^_^

But before I begin, I just figured I didn't tell ya that your writing is amazing. Plus the character of Levi is so well made! Aye, you're a fantastic writer alright.

ch5: I like Jerome! ^_^ I'm wondering if it was mentioned somewhere and I missed it, but how old is Levi? Must be atleast late twenties...
I won't have a happy morning now... I get to see this Clint so early on in the chapter... Levi please beat him up and get this over with! BEgging ya! >:( Plus he seems like a half-wit. His insulting starts and ends at 'fairy', which frankly isn't an insult in my opinion. Dah! What a moron!
Okay, a personal preference here. The "***" look better than the "@@@" when you show the change of scene. No offense! ^_^
Hah!! I feel so victorious!! I told ya Wayyt wasn't a very great guy! :D Hahaha And, and and. I finally meet the other party!!! The one who Levi will fall for IS Erich. Oh yeah! It better be him! Him and me both dislike W. So yeah xD
AHHH!! I'll pull my hair out! This Clint is harassing E too! Kick him right now!!
I love L and E's conversation. Aye, they have to be together! ^_^
I hope Gavin finds someone good.
Okay... I'm not complaining anymore. Looks like the idiot Clint can go beyond 'fairy' but I don't like it... I'll be sure to come up with a suitable insulting nickname for this Clint tonight
Hah! Love Stephanie

Levi you damn damn damn moron!! How dare he hurt Erich!! He better apologize in the next chapter. Also, they both better team up and kick that Clint's ass.

Going for breakfast. See ya in the afternoon Levi! *waves*

I'm hoping you don't kill me for my long rants, but I'll take the risk. Hahaha

ch4: Fairyland sounds so cool! Idk why this Clint idiot doesn't like it >:( Though pink doesn't go with Fairyland if you ask me. Sky blue does! Yep!
Okay, they just pissed me off so much more. Someone get them out of the chapter please.
Damn it, just call the police already. I see these idiots as potential villains as the story goes further >:( And I dun even want them here right now. Plus, I was so sure I'd kick Levi too if he didn't interrupt soon enough. Luckily, he did! You saved him from my wrath, author!
I like Gavin! ...Unless he's a future villain too...
Now wait here, I'm confused!! Who the hell is the hero? I mean, besides Levi? Who's the one who'll be paired up with him? Gavin is ok, but I dun have a good feeling about this Wyatt. Dunno why though haha
Aw man, I love Damon! xD And Levi is... um... he's scared. I guess that's too... realistic. I'm used to seeing heroes who beat up all opponents hahaha So, I guess I like him even more for being normal! xD

Why? Why? Why? Why do I have to bear with this Clint in every chapter?! I'm gonna break my head
Hahaha Levi forgot a date! That's nice cause I dun like Wyatt :D I must be a big idiot for having strange first impressions for no reason at all haha xD I hope Wyatt preoves me wrong. Something tells me he's not our other hero though Or I'm wrong? Could be! ^_^
Aww, Damon is so cute! I really like him :D And Levi, bro, I tell ya Wyatt ain't the one. Hahaha but they're saying they won't get in a relationship, and I'm guessing I'll see high tech drama involving L,W and G.
Still, where's the other hero?

And I'm gonna go sleep now bro. If mum catches me glued to my comp in the middle of the night, she'll have my neck. You can dread my rest of the comments that are due tomorrow!

Woaahh! Hii! :D Reading this from start again cause I'm finally free -whew- And cause I'm taking the liberty to rant, bear with me.

ch2: Glad Levi has a friend. But I have a bad feeling about this plan that he and the other two guys made for the tavern. Given Henry was a a*hole, but I'm hoping Levi doesn't do something rash and unemploy so many people. I could kick this Clint though. >:(

ch3: All my worry and Levi is just doing a renovation! Great plan though haha! Levi is great, firing everyone who's homophobic haha I would do that too I don't really like mean people, but his meanness is totally awesome! xD
Aw, I love this idea of "equality for all". Glad they have a male waiter! :D Btw, does that really happen? idk...
I have no idea why Levi didn't beat up this Travis and Clint... I'm hoping not to see anymore of them And I defs don't want them to hurt Levi or I'll kill them myself. >:(
Eh... I don't really like lavender rose color, Levi xD Haha I'll survive though XD
Pahahaha he really is so obsessed with proper grammar! xD Ehhh!! I have nothing against pink, but I have this serious dislike for the color. Idk why it makes me frown to see pink xD
Yayy! Yayyy!! Hahahaha!! :D :D :D Gavin likes Levi! :D And even though something tells me it won't end nicely for G, I'm so happy he feels that way haha Sorry if that sounds screwed up...

Okay, I'm not gonna extend my comment on ch3 any longer. But seeing that he likes his renovated place so much, I kind of want Levi to stay in JHole. At least for a while! ^_^

*sorry triple post*

@ Tipsy Returns
LOL ;)

Nah, couldn't imagine them otherwise. And you better not risk thanking me, or you'll end up reading my rant on every chapter... (By rant I mean thoughts... xD)

@ Tipsy Returns
Thank you Tipsy! You're sweet to comment. I know they're long...

Man, I'm only done with the first chapters (they're long, so...yeah xD) but I have to admit I really liked Levi. This has such a good start! ^_^

@ A. J.
Anytime! :D Thank you for accepting! <3

@ Zadiekins
thanks. and thanks for the friend request!

@ A. J.
Well, I'm sure I'll love him even more as he grows! I really can't wait to read this one!

@ Zadiekins
Gavin is a cutie, and young. He'll have to grow up in this next one though. ;)