Wow this was ridiculously cute. It made my heart all warm and fuzzy. I really liked the plot of Marlene not entirely being in love. As terrible as it seems, I totally sympathize with that emotion. Really, when you love another person while in a relationship, it leads to that kind of feeling. That the person you're with is inadequate to suit your needs. And then somehow, there's this indescribable space between you and the other person. I don't know if that is delving into a deeper meaning than you'd meant for. Either way, I really like the voice behind this. It's got that dark feeling, but then kept a silver lining to it. You did quite an amazing job with this story. Keep up your great work!
January 26th, 2015 at 05:41am