Forgotten Tomorrow. - Comments

  • triplehearts

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    This was a fantastic chapter! It gives much more insight to what was happening around here and it was just a whole lot better. c:

    Now I'm still waiting to see what Daryl's deal is and why he is acting all weird, but you've peaked my interest with Scarlett saving Glenn's life.
    December 1st, 2014 at 01:46pm
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    How did she save Glenn's life? And I wish Daryl would say something to her instead of putting a wall up. Looking forward to reading more :)
    December 1st, 2014 at 09:00am
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    @ triplehearts
    Auto correct error lol I have to go back and check it when I get the chance. :)
    November 28th, 2014 at 06:39am
  • triplehearts

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    "oukking"? What does that mean?

    A short, but nice chapter, the only thing I think it needs is a little more description here and there. Other than that, I'm still waiting patiently to find out what Scarlett and Daryl fought about before she hit her head. c:
    November 28th, 2014 at 02:28am
  • triplehearts

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    I see we have the same layout. ;)

    I loved the first chapter. I'm excited to see where this goes. I like how you left a lot of questions going.

    Update soon!
    November 25th, 2014 at 06:19am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    This seems like an interesting story so far even if the first chapter was a bit short. I look forward to reading more :)
    November 25th, 2014 at 03:52am