I don't which one I love the most, but what I do know is that I am absolutely in love with your writing!!
I like how it's a bit different from Happy Birthday, but it definitely gives you the same feel, in a way. We still don't really know much about the characters, but now we really have a better insight into the relationship. You definitely leave me curious just like the first one. It makes me wonder if this was before being broken up or after, it makes me wonder everything about them. You really do know how to leave a girl hanging and thinking, I appreciate that as a reader, aha. I'd love to see more of them in the future and I know I'll definitely be reading more of your work.
I like how it's a bit different from Happy Birthday, but it definitely gives you the same feel, in a way. We still don't really know much about the characters, but now we really have a better insight into the relationship. You definitely leave me curious just like the first one. It makes me wonder if this was before being broken up or after, it makes me wonder everything about them. You really do know how to leave a girl hanging and thinking, I appreciate that as a reader, aha. I'd love to see more of them in the future and I know I'll definitely be reading more of your work.