As your falling down - Comments

umm this would be good but you got to space you talking out... like

"HEY! Lisa! over here!" I feel a light tap on my shoulder,

"Hey Razza!" I sweek at him while ruffling his perfect black hair.

"heeeeeyy now.. theres no need for that.." He pouts

"I havnt seen you in like forever! How have you been?"

"Good man, good.. ive been travling around with this kick ass new band!"

"Really? whats this bands name?" Now i was starting to get interested.. Ive always had a thing for guys in bands.

kinda liek that so its easyier to read!