Bound - Comments

(Origin fiction contest *facepalm* sorry for the horrid long wait dear)
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I do like how you explain how the fear consumed the O.C, and how they couldn't do anything because of the fear and that they really had alot of fears. Oddly for some reason I thought of 50 shades of grey at the ending part :)

Two
fibre - I think you meant fiber. I really like the way that you wrote out this chapter, in depth and it was slightly creepy in a sense, here we go with the 50 shades again I was actually thinking about them in front of a nice fire going. But anyways, I didn't find much errors in this except for the one I mentioned earlier. It also makes me wonder what's up with her mental state.

Three.
I know this feeling all to well, I literally lay in bed for a good hlaf hour contemplating, if I should get up or say ef it and sleep. But I get up at 2 am every day, I could also sense she has some sort of depression going on.

I have to say I really like the way this story was written, I like the last chapter as well. I will be reading the other stories placed in the contest soon. So keep am eye out for winners. :) again I'm so sorry this took ages to comment on.

This is really good! I really love this one and can't wait for the next update!

This is really good, okay? Okay.

SHE LOST HER JOB! OH NOES! all hell's gonna break lose, i just know it. I feel for her though. Sleeping in bed? Yeah that sounds lovely and very tempting.

I wonder how her boyfriend will react to her missing work? And getting fired... Spankings are in the near future, I can tell.

I love your story so far! I can't wait to read more of it!

You're right. I WAS EXPECTING SMUT!

Her master seems so kind yet benevolent at the same time. I'm wondering what kind of punishment she'll recieve. Poor narrator. :'(

Im enjoying this story so far and i hope put some smut in eventually (which i know you will.)

You did a great job. Keep up the great work, Gats!

Lovely and gripping beginning with such relatable fears. Very interested to see where you go with this, so I hope you keep the chapters coming.

My first initial thought is walking shoes. Yeah, sorry, I'm just in a giddy mood atm.

Anyways, this story is really powerful, it's full of fear and yet there's a bit of passion in it. There's a lot of mystery to it, too, and I love a good mystery.

I'm wondering if there's going to be more chapters. I just checked the info for this and I'm assuming there will be so I'm subscribing (I'll always subscribe to your things because I love your writing!)

Keep up the good work, girly!