Have you read the Breathing series? This story reminds me of it...
January 6th, 2015 at 07:35am
Within the Castle - Comments
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This is such a beautifully sad story. I have to say I am a little disappointed that she is so.. down? Even so, I love how well rounded and defined Luke is, and I would love to know more about him. In addition, it would be wonderful to know more about every thing (even maybe a bit about Vincent), before the story is resolved. I can feel an ending coming soon, so I hope that it all comes to a close in a better light. I do love the story and your writing, and I look forward to much more.January 6th, 2015 at 07:35am
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I like your story, but since its sad what happens to her I can't say I love it.... I really hope it changes soon and she gets away from her man and goes to Luke. I also love Luke as a character... :) Update soon please!December 24th, 2014 at 11:54am
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I like your story, but since its sad what happens to her I can't say I love it.... I really hope it changes soon and she gets away from her man and goes to Luke. I also love Luke as a character... :) Update soon please!December 24th, 2014 at 11:54am
