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  • Quoth Raven

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    @ acid_rain88
    In chapter ten, though I need to go back and edit it a little, he says that he's undercover and that they are posing as a biker gang. That's why he said what he did to Williams.
    July 7th, 2015 at 04:51pm
  • helena_88

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    gang war?? hasn't he told her the truth after all? thought he said something about being undercover and shit.. XD or i'm just totally lost atm- too tired after work to think straight Cute
    heh, i'd probably scream and pass out too if I were in her position- seeing him with blood all over his face like that.. XD
    July 7th, 2015 at 03:29pm
  • helena_88

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    hah, ya know.. this has me so curious through the chapters and I kind of love that she's so angry and difficult all of the time XD that she don't just accept the situation and be happy-go-lucky.. give them a hard time! Cute
    June 22nd, 2015 at 09:09am
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    @ ambird96
    Thank you for your comment! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Very Happy
    May 20th, 2015 at 05:04am
  • ambird96

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    seriously love this! Cannot wait to read more :)
    May 19th, 2015 at 05:14am
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    @ DeidraX23
    Thanks for your comment! I'm sorry about the confusion so far, going back and reading it I realized it is kind of hard to follow. I'll make sure that most of that gets cleared up in the next chapter.
    March 30th, 2015 at 03:49am
  • DeidraX23

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    These are some really good updates but I'm soo confused as to where all this is coming from and why it's happening. Will have to keep reading! :)
    March 30th, 2015 at 01:54am
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    @ DeidraX23
    Oh I'm eeager to get the next chapter written out. The family emergency is going to be tricky to write, only because I need to work out the sequence a bit more, but it should be interesting.
    March 4th, 2015 at 07:04am
  • DeidraX23

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    Great update of the 2 chapters! I figured that's why he brought Terra along and not his actual g/f because of the deal. I'm anxious to read what the family emergency is.
    March 4th, 2015 at 05:49am
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    @ DeidraX23
    Thank you so much for your comment! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Posting the next chapter soon!
    February 3rd, 2015 at 07:24am
  • DeidraX23

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    How does this not have any comments?! Just found it last night and love it!
    It totally throws me for a loop though, which is great..I thought for sure Matt was single so I did not expect him to have a fiance but I feel like he still likes Terra and vice versa.

    Can't wait for an update!
    February 3rd, 2015 at 07:01am