I really love this! Though I do think you could do with a beta, there's something about this that had me looking past the errors. Definitely would like to see more Fred x Emilia! But she and Draco are an interesting pair as well. Keep it up!
I loved the update. I loved seeing the sweeter side of Draco at the end and I can't wait to see how you add her into the story and who her Yule Ball date is. Post more soon!
for whatever reason i never like stories involving harry having a sister but this is different. i really really like this so far. i'm glad that emilia has her own issues with the dark lord. can't wait for more!