OMFG I LOVE THIS!! Please update soon! <3
March 21st, 2011 at 11:43pm
Coincidently, very soon. The next chapter is nearly finished. I then have one more chapter to write and after that is the final chapter, which is already written. Then there will be an epilogue (not yet written) and then everything is finished.
- Frank Iero.:
- Aww.
I miss this story terribly.
When will the next update be?
whoaa, fucker. this chick ^^^^ has got it goin' on. i totally didn't realize that until i read this comment. *applauds both comedically tragic. and lies for a liar.*
- comedically tragic.:
- First off, I hope you realize how much I look forward to and anticipate the updates to this story, cause I really, really do, and I pressed reload on the summary page… I dunno, maybe fifty times (:tehe:) till I saw that you had added a chapter. Because I really have that much of a life. :lmfao And I’m procrastinating on doing a load of geometry chapter, so yay for a chapter to distract me. :shifty :XD
We were now on our last day in Rome, spending time in a park. I stared at the clear blue sky, watching birds pass overhead as they made their journeys to wherever birds fly.
I really loved that, cause it connects back to how they're leaving Europe. And also... how he doesn't know where the birds are going.. and he doesn't really know where he and Frank are going either. Like... he doesn't know how their relationship's going to go after they leave Europe. I thought it was a really nice touch to the chapter.
I linked our fingers in his lap, curling up even more so that my feet were between his thighs.
I really enjoyed how you described that. Most people would have just said something like "we held hands and cuddled together" but you made it so specific and vivid and I feel like... like I could curl up into that position by how you described it.
I liked how the chapter ended. The last sentence.. it feels like it has this underlying sense of hope, but mostly it's just Gerard worrying about the future. But there's that hope that things are going to be okay present in it and I love it and it's executed beautifully and for someone who was having trouble wrapping up the chapter I think you did phenomenally.
You did not need to recc' my story in yours. :cheese: Holy fucking shit. Well, that was nice of you. Really nice. Awww, I really don’t know what to say, except that I love you and you have made my evening.
I love you so much. :arms: