Can I Meet You, Alone? - Comments

  • Brittany_Bloodsucker

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    OMFG I LOVE THIS!! Please update soon! <3
    March 21st, 2011 at 11:43pm
  • Lies for a Liar

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    Okay so for anyone looking here right now, I have currently lost all my writing because I had everything saved on an external hard drive that is now broken. I'm going to try and get it fixed but obviously it has meant that whenever I've felt like writing a little more... I couldn't. Fingers crossed it'll get fixed though.
    October 4th, 2009 at 01:10pm
  • Lies for a Liar

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    Frank Iero.:
    Aww.
    I miss this story terribly.

    When will the next update be?
    Coincidently, very soon. The next chapter is nearly finished. I then have one more chapter to write and after that is the final chapter, which is already written. Then there will be an epilogue (not yet written) and then everything is finished.
    Sorry for the massive wait though. Writer's block and stress are my only excuses. Booo! x)
    August 15th, 2009 at 05:57pm
  • Michael Jackson..

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    Aww.
    I miss this story terribly.

    When will the next update be?
    August 15th, 2009 at 08:36am
  • Lies for a Liar

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    Thanks to everyone In Love :arms:
    I love you all dearly and I'm sorry for making you wait so long.

    Just to let you know, I'll be updating next Thursday. If not then Friday, as my exams finish then.
    I'm so surprised that only 7 people have unsubscribed. I would have expected more with such a long time of no updates x) so thanks for sticking it out for me, and, again, I'm so sorry for this massive wait.
    :cute:
    June 7th, 2009 at 09:36pm
  • mydemonicromance

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    ok, I've just been reading through this story, & I'm only on ch. 27 so far, but i just wanted to say that I was just listening to Friends & Lovers by Madina Lake, when I realized how perfect that song really is for this story....kiinda creepy, really...O_o
    anyways, awesome so far!!!!
    June 6th, 2009 at 03:20am
  • bulletproof heart.

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    I asked my friend who has a Mibba for a list of Frerards and this was on there and I just finished it right now and… wow, it’s so incredible! My favorite Frerard I’ve read on here, officially. In Love
    The beginning was so sad when they weren’t together. I teared up several times and full-out cried once.
    And now they’re together and it’s so cute but I’m still a bit worried about what’s going to happen when they leave Europe…

    My favorite part –
    Life is like a maze. You get pushed into it one end, knowing that the only thing you need to do is get to the end, when you die. And along the way you go down a lot of the wrong routes and get a little or completely lost, but you always know you’ll find the end because everybody does. I was completely lost in my maze right now.

    Beautiful.
    May 13th, 2009 at 11:42pm
  • le bonheur

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    I loved the update!!
    more soon?
    April 14th, 2009 at 02:25am
  • breathe for love.

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    love it!!
    April 8th, 2009 at 01:31am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    I liked it
    April 7th, 2009 at 06:13am
  • AniRawr

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    They are so adorable. xD
    I can't wait to see what happenes when they go back to America!
    April 6th, 2009 at 06:37pm
  • playground eyes.

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    Aww, great update!
    It was so cute. Wow
    Keep writing!
    :hug: xoxo ♥
    April 6th, 2009 at 04:58am
  • The Maine

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    comedically tragic.:
    First off, I hope you realize how much I look forward to and anticipate the updates to this story, cause I really, really do, and I pressed reload on the summary page… I dunno, maybe fifty times (:tehe:) till I saw that you had added a chapter. Because I really have that much of a life. :lmfao And I’m procrastinating on doing a load of geometry chapter, so yay for a chapter to distract me. :shifty :XD

    We were now on our last day in Rome, spending time in a park. I stared at the clear blue sky, watching birds pass overhead as they made their journeys to wherever birds fly.
    I really loved that, cause it connects back to how they're leaving Europe. And also... how he doesn't know where the birds are going.. and he doesn't really know where he and Frank are going either. Like... he doesn't know how their relationship's going to go after they leave Europe. I thought it was a really nice touch to the chapter. In Love

    I linked our fingers in his lap, curling up even more so that my feet were between his thighs.
    I really enjoyed how you described that. Most people would have just said something like "we held hands and cuddled together" but you made it so specific and vivid and I feel like... like I could curl up into that position by how you described it.

    I liked how the chapter ended. The last sentence.. it feels like it has this underlying sense of hope, but mostly it's just Gerard worrying about the future. But there's that hope that things are going to be okay present in it and I love it and it's executed beautifully and for someone who was having trouble wrapping up the chapter I think you did phenomenally.

    You did not need to recc' my story in yours. :cheese: Holy fucking shit. Well, that was nice of you. Really nice. Awww, I really don’t know what to say, except that I love you and you have made my evening.

    I love you so much. :arms:
    whoaa, fucker. this chick ^^^^ has got it goin' on. i totally didn't realize that until i read this comment. *applauds both comedically tragic. and lies for a liar.*
    April 6th, 2009 at 03:53am
  • The Maine

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    you're amazing.
    April 6th, 2009 at 03:49am
  • Alice Verney

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    cute update
    April 6th, 2009 at 03:38am
  • FuckNo

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    SOOOO CUUUUUTE!

    I loved the update ^_^

    *snuggles them*
    April 6th, 2009 at 02:57am
  • paranormality.

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    First off, I hope you realize how much I look forward to and anticipate the updates to this story, cause I really, really do, and I pressed reload on the summary page… I dunno, maybe fifty times (:tehe:) till I saw that you had added a chapter. Because I really have that much of a life. :lmfao And I’m procrastinating on doing a load of geometry chapter, so yay for a chapter to distract me. :shifty :XD

    We were now on our last day in Rome, spending time in a park. I stared at the clear blue sky, watching birds pass overhead as they made their journeys to wherever birds fly.
    I really loved that, cause it connects back to how they're leaving Europe. And also... how he doesn't know where the birds are going.. and he doesn't really know where he and Frank are going either. Like... he doesn't know how their relationship's going to go after they leave Europe. I thought it was a really nice touch to the chapter. In Love

    I linked our fingers in his lap, curling up even more so that my feet were between his thighs.
    I really enjoyed how you described that. Most people would have just said something like "we held hands and cuddled together" but you made it so specific and vivid and I feel like... like I could curl up into that position by how you described it.

    I liked how the chapter ended. The last sentence.. it feels like it has this underlying sense of hope, but mostly it's just Gerard worrying about the future. But there's that hope that things are going to be okay present in it and I love it and it's executed beautifully and for someone who was having trouble wrapping up the chapter I think you did phenomenally.

    You did not need to recc' my story in yours. :cheese: Holy fucking shit. Well, that was nice of you. Really nice. Awww, I really don’t know what to say, except that I love you and you have made my evening.

    I love you so much. :arms:
    April 6th, 2009 at 02:49am
  • Lies for a Liar

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    Update!

    Thank you for the comments, everyone :arms:.

    Not so sure about this chapter. Meh.
    I know where I'm going. Kinda, next chapter could be iffy. Don't want a repeat of chapters 34 and 35 :roll:.
    April 6th, 2009 at 02:35am
  • Gee'slilsis

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    Awwww, end of vacation get away-ness =(
    Ah well..
    Things should be interesting when they go back lol

    Update soon Please =)
    March 31st, 2009 at 09:49pm
  • herpy berpy.

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    YAY! Two updates (even though I did read yesterdays...)
    Two updates in a row is always good. Especially for Ferards.
    I sound really hopeful and desperate... :XD
    March 31st, 2009 at 05:21am