Who and to What Now? - Comments

Girl y is u pouting for.....Draco Malfoy is fine as hell fucking delicious like he puts the yum in yummy my lord I need a fan

@ MoMo_92
its okay the next chapter is almost ready, just need to make a few adjustments and add a little bit more to it. It will be up in a few days.

A cliffhanger really, I waited a week practically and u end the chapter with not revealing the task I want to know what she has to do :(

@ MoMo_92
Im not sure. I didn't realize people actually like my writing. I'll try and finish it by this weekend.

Loving this....seriously when is the next chapter

As an English Major I can't help but notice the tiny grammatical errors. However, you do an outstanding job of capturing the thought process of someone who is the age of your character which is very hard for a lot of writers to do. This is a great story please update soon.

As an English Major I can't help but notice the tiny grammatical errors. However, you do an outstanding job of capturing the thought process of someone who is the age of your character which is very hard for a lot of writers to do. This is a great story please update soon.

This is good, I do think you should space out the paragraphs a bit instead of making them super long. You have a lot of description. Which isn't bad but you should add more conversations. To much discription could actually turn readers away. If you need any help your more then welcome to inbox me :)