Snowfall - Comments

This was a nice little read, and it makes me wish that we had snow where I lived. But then I think about how hectic snow could make things, like the narrator mentioned the roads would be hell...then I think, maybe I'll admire it in movies and pictures only.

Good job!

I like this, it's christmasy and I think it captures everything perfectly... Good job

I like that the layout is christmas-colored, its a good idea but I think the red is a bit too bright and can kind of be distracting. But I otherwise I think it's super festive, and I like it. I think in the first paragraph you meant to say "probably" and not "properly". This was short, but I think it really encompassed Robbie's feelings on the first snowfall. There was a softness to the piece as you talked about the snow, and it flowed nicely and was easy to picture Robbie witnessing this first snowfall. Good job!